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Escape From Paradise

Tác giả: Ozymandias007i
Sci-fi
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  • 4.7
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What is Escape From Paradise

Đọc tiểu thuyết Escape From Paradise của tác giả Ozymandias007i được xuất bản trên WebNovel.God is dead and the tears of the citizens of Paradise won't be enough to wash away the blood. Mwene, a gifted mechanic, believes his long lost father is the cause of this earth shattering revelation....

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God is dead and the tears of the citizens of Paradise won't be enough to wash away the blood. Mwene, a gifted mechanic, believes his long lost father is the cause of this earth shattering revelation. His search for answers tangles him up in a journey to the edge of the galaxy, with the world government on his tail, where he'll find answers to god, reality and most importantly, himself.

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Warning[Mature Contents] ‘’Poor girl,you fell on the most dangerous family ever’’ he said with serious expression April thought he was joking but looking at his expression he was not. ‘’You are in the presence of the 7 monsters sons of the king‘’ he said with a cold frightened smile . She looked at them and suddenly the color of their eyes changes. Each of them had different eyes colors. ‘’What’s that?!’’ She thought frightened He approaches her and wanted to touched her . Even though she was frightened she made an attempt to slap him but the man hold her hand brought her near him and said ‘’If you want to slap me then do it with your lips’’ he said with deep mesmerizing voice ,a smirk on his lips. After that her father has been held back by the most influential and cruel man in the village because he owed him a huge amount of money. April want to get her father out of that situation,even if she had to married one of the seven brother princes of the kingdom to have the required money and pay off her father’s debts. But rumors are circulating about the princes of the kingdom saying that they are cursed and possessed. Since she was a sceptic girl she didn’t believe in all those rumors.... Will she put up with her new husband and this new Life ?, will she support the true nature of the Envel family ?,will she succeed in getting her father out of the cruel man of her village . . Note of the author I’m a newbie..this is my first story. Please take note that English is not the first language of your author so don’t mind the mistakes. I will try and correct it. Any positive critic of the book will help me to improve ^^ The cover is not mine.

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TheCreator_
TheCreator_Lv1TheCreator_

Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure

RosemilOduor
RosemilOduorLv11RosemilOduor

Good piece of writing. I'm hooked into reading this. It is carefully drafted and the synopsis is eye catching. Can't wait for more updates. Keep doing you.

H0racio
H0racioLv1H0racio

The quality of the writing is very good, the author describes the scenarios very well. There was always a bit of mystery here and there that made me want to read more to see what would happen next. The only thing that bothered me a little was the length of the paragraphs, but it depends from person to person, otherwise it was really good to me.

Williane_M_P
Williane_M_PLv3Williane_M_P

Your quality of writing and story development are magnificent, congratulations. The world background was also well crafted and masterfully developed.

Omara_Ai
Omara_AiLv4Omara_Ai

Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like these are definitely my cup of tea. This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics And also the supporting cast of characters is excellent. Please update more author.

Dara_Manuel
Dara_ManuelLv3Dara_Manuel

The author managed to build a very solid world, the scenarios are well described, I was captivated by the author's writing style, the mystery surrounding the ML and how the stiry unfolds as I read more. So far my advice would be to try reducing some paragraphs.

Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13Akira_Monadelle

Definitely another hidden gem. This novel is beyond flawless and contains a very commendable writing style. The author's wording is incredibly poetic but not difficult to understand. The transitions at times are a bit confusing but it got clearer the more I read when I got to understand the flow. The novel overall is worth the time to read 👍

ClaisiceLouice
ClaisiceLouiceLv1ClaisiceLouice

The book's writing quality is excellent. I personally like the first paragraphs of its every chapter. The world backgroud was good from the very begingging and it was getting more clearer throughout the chapters. Overall, the book was great. You are doing a good job, author.

Dream_land
Dream_landLv3Dream_land

Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. Can't really wait to read what happens next!!

KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1Lv4KayLillyt_1

A captivating story that draws the readers in with every exhilarating act, beautifully described scene of people or landscape and unrelenting emotions that makes the readers feel what the characters are feeling. Quite unique and a strongly recommended read. Well done author.

Kalki_gsk
Kalki_gskLv1Kalki_gsk

Really well written story and a unique world building. Its like a futuristic cyberpunk but with mysterious powers in the blend. That said, the scenes of carnage are just described using a few words. It can be expanded upon to make people feel the impact. And the paragraphing should be done properly..shorter paragraphs would be easier to read and floow. Keep up the great work

restful_sins
restful_sinsLv11restful_sins

this book was rather unique when it comes to character design and world building I was rather surprised to see that the main character isn't looking at the present.

black_spade69
black_spade69Lv1black_spade69

The story is very interesting with interesting characters. I hope there will be more chapters in the future. One thing I would like to suggest is to divide the longer paragraphs into shorter paragraphs. Maybe it is just me but it feels harder for me to read.

SabergKeys
SabergKeysLv2SabergKeys

Amazing, your writing style on your story is truly amazing. Even at the first chapter it got me hooked into it, so keep on going at the story, I can't wait.

Pixiepiu
PixiepiuLv12Pixiepiu

your writing quality is very good. I like it very much. your synopsis is very eye catching . Seriously the first chapter got me hooked. keep it up and update more.

Gaureeey
GaureeeyLv1Gaureeey

okay, Chase and Mwe's character development in just 3 chapters is done pretty effortlessly, 3 chapters isn't enough to judge it but the fact that 'god is dead' in the synopsis got me curious to dive right into the book, the description and the world build of heaven and how it might be is done well, isn't a wordy novel so its easier to process for non-native English speakers too, plus the plot seems to be heading into a fineass direction

TheMortalGod
TheMortalGodLv1TheMortalGod

Only read 2 chapters for now. Need more chapters to discern the overall plot of the story, but so far it seems good and has the potential to turn into something big. Waiting for more chapters to be published.

Aravind_S
Aravind_SLv4Aravind_S

By looking at the synopsis and first chapter. I can see that MC got serious about the journey. Hope there will be good character development for this unique plot.

Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_ArcadianLv3Luminous_Arcadian

The first chapter was enough to hook me. The plotline, writing style, and characterization were great. I like the voice that the characters emit. I think it could be better if some paragraphs were to be divided since it was too long and the main idea was different from the other part. That was just my concern, but overall it was a really great story.

ARnab
ARnabLv2ARnab

Well it's only the first chapters, but the chapter title, well it was quite something. Thought the actual thing was different from what I was thinking and the story was quite astrounding. But I hope you update more frequently. I will be waiting for the rest to come

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