I like it, 1/10

"Soo.... Can you tell me something?"

In the misty mountain

An young voice echoed from the white peaks, filled with traces of boredom and dullness like a teenager in math class

"It isnt time yet youngster"

Another voice echoed through the peaks, its stern and old tone felt like a stuck up old guy with boundless dignity and no flexibility

"...I know, it is just... Can you untie my hands, my feet are kinda blue"

The aparent youngster never recived an answer to his request for a long time, as an weird and akward atmosfere was created.

So the misty and misterious mountain became silent and lonely, like its snow that for some weird reason atracts 4000 year old young(?) people with 8° grade syndrome to brag? or something... idk

sudenly the silence is broken in the snowy mountains.

an thin old man with a curved back looked at his captive... aprentice and said with a speachless tone

"....what does your hands have to do with.... your feet"

The young child with short black hair, unhealthy pale skin and black eyes without pupils responded with a dull tone as stiff as a piece of wood

"I can use them to move around"

the old man looked at the irregular path between the peaks and the slender and weak arms of the child in front of him and sudenly regreted a little kidnaping... recruting the child.

Pitou, the creppy expressionless child. looked at the silent old man that was regreting his life choices and thought to himself

[well, that was easy].

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Soon pitou and the hunch back old man reached a flat surface in the center of the valley between peaks

In there lays a huge structure covered in mist and snow giving it an desolete and ilusory aura, the construction conects the peaks to a central area that was built like a city with huge buildings. and the huge wooden gate with golden and purple details, depicting dragons and Phoenix. Its huge stone walls embraced the outskirts of the city like a protective mother leting a dignified presence.

the hunched old man raised his back like a sign of respect and morality. and looked at the silent Pitou with enourmous pride and confidence and said loudly

"Welcome to the Invencible heavenly spirit sect"

-...-

Somehow Pitou's face became even more deadpan as he looked at the old man with an unimpresed look

this seam to disapoint the old man. As his back hunched even lower than before and a depresed sensation started to come out of him.

With his aura decreasing the city(?) began to get clear as we sudenly realise that this building who looked so holy before was just a plain city with a weird fog and snow covering it

the old man let out a desapointed sigh, and resumed his walk to the gate.