Dragon ball: Red Eyes

because the author is my homie ,he obviously gets 5 stars from that alone, but the story is good ,the grammar is good, the ff will be good probably, I mean my homie is writing it so obviously it will be good.

this story is about struggling to OPness, he will start off weak, REALLY weak

Good fanfic, love the characters and so on, BUT a small warning: HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! HE'S A MOSSAD AGENT! I'VE SEEN IT!!!!!

its a great fanfic and interesting idea but will he have susano since its op in naruto so maybe it will be op here too ....anyways this fanfic is probably dropped so this review is uselesss

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FOR TRAP~KUN 5stars…………………………………………………MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOEE MORW MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!