Danmachi: Shrouded in the Abyss of Darkness

I just have one thing to ask. How can this novel STILL not be talked about? This author is a ghost. 15 days and 44 chaps, which is crazy enough, but the writing is superb, development is crazy good, Ren is a three-dimensional character that is FULL of problems and yet we all love him because he's just that cool and amazing. The background was really finely made, tailored perfectly to match his own problems. I don't believe there is a better Danmachi fanfic. This novel does not need to add systems, stuff from anime or novels. It's crazy good just with what we got. I hope this will grow well, hoping this will reach top 1.

i do not think i even need to say anything

I like Ais but I still prefer Ryuu[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]

That's just great. I bloody love the synopsis and the beginning of the story. The grammar is good, enjoyable to read, we'll see what happens next.

I’m going to go in depth and redoing this review. I will also preface this by saying I read up to chapter 20. This fanfic in my opinion is boring. I think this way because there is such a thing as over description. Everytime with how either the OC thinks or how they view the world it’s over described leading to longer paragraphs or multiple paragraphs where there is a lack of anything happening besides description. Where the story is in a standstill. Description is good but not when it drones on. Also from what I read this feels no different from any other OP OC in Danmachi the only difference is that the OC was added 800 years before canon to get to where he is. While the whole creepy male Yandere is different it almost feels less potent since he has been alive for so long. Also why say you are in a parallel world when everything seems the same especially when compared to other fics. I will say this is an easy fanfic to read in the sense that the grammar and spelling are top tier. If you enjoy it you enjoy it. I just personally don’t for the reasons I said above and more but my other reasons just have to do with the base of the story. I do hope you continue.

The protagonist is an emo obsessed with ains, he dies and a Goddess offers to reincarnate him so he can marry the expressionless and characterless blonde. (the goddess does this because she wants a warrior, if the emo has the talent to be a god)

Unfortunately, I didn't see any unique plot actions or characters. everything is quite simple, we have an obsessive character with another character and in this obsession he is helped by a certain god providing him with abilities to achieve. What for? Why? I admit I don't like the concept of "higher powers". But here it is literally ff without any goals and ideas other than this very obsession. Although the first chapter of the novel immediately shows the "abnormality" of the main character, but as a result, he does not grow above himself or overcome difficulties or anything. I'll give you how I see it. A person is obsessed with a character and will do everything to achieve any feelings for him, most likely he will create conditions for achieving these goals and eventually establish some kind of relationship with him, but for us, as for him, it will obviously be a fake relationship where everything was clearly verified without any suspense, generally speaking a sweet wrapper with nothing inside.

It's too good to even say anything. You'll probably find it extremely difficult to find a novel with this standard. I do not know what to say anymore, just read it.

Binge through the novels in just under 2 hours. All I can say about this novel is amazingly spectacular! Very well written and I'm very fond of the way the author changes the POVs. I hope the best for you author.

I really this story and it entertains me a lot, let this story have more than 100 chapters!

In simple words? This novel will blow your mind the more you read it. I like the fact this Author is pretty much a professional in his work. If there are people to mention, he will mention their work properly. The writing style and quality are amazing. What the? I don't think I've seen this kind of quality even when reading EPIC, and that's the highest praise I can give to this novel.

dunno man, maybe it's the character, maybe it's the plot, but I love this. Perfect.

Hmm, A personality just like the MC of "The Villain Who Robbed The Heroine"? I'm in!

The story is overall above average to me. The writing and plot has quality, which I tend to see is more character driven than story driven. Ren is an interesting character which is kinda a much darker reflection of what Ais could have been if not for the Loki Familia. You managed to get the personality of the other characters and on how they would react to the situation. And yet what really pretty much didn't made me enjoy the story is Ren's character. His obsession kinda hurt the story more to me than benefit it. While having a goal is interesting, his obsession was just creepy as you have described him which killed it for me. He wasn't fun to read and I enjoy a lot of dark character but even then they had something intriguing which made them enjoyable to read. I'm not saying that he is a bad character, just not the type of character than i enjoy reading especially as the main character.

I'm too lazy to write a proper review. But here's an image to summarize this.

Tem que postar mais, só acho que o personagem principal não deveria ter falado que era de outro mundo eu também quero ver um pouco da reação do Bell na hora que ele ver a ais com o personagem principal

Moarrrrr.

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Am I the only one who thinks this is creepy? haha. But it's entertaining in its own way. Well... Ais is my favorite and the fact that most of the Danmachi Fanfics I've read leave it to Bell Cranel frustrated me a lot.

This story has one of the best character interactions i have ever found in a fic. The characters' motivations and the Mc's obsession are portrayed very well. I look forward to the future chapters.