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Cultivation Pet Shop

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  • 4.1
    90 số lượng người đọc
  • NO.200+
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"What? That chicken is actually a phoenix?" "You're telling me that this dog is a qilin?" "This little lizard is the legendary dragon?" "What kind of weird pet shop is this? When did legendary beasts become so easy to find!" An ordinary looking shop, but what hides inside are legendary cultivation pets. Step inside, but only if you dare. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Come follow me on twitter: https://twitter.com/DXHaseoXD Come check out my stream: https://twitch.tv/dxhaseoxd

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Âm lượng 1 :Establishing Fame
Âm lượng 2 :Spreading Wings
Âm lượng 3 :New realms
Âm lượng 4 :Peak of the World

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  • Đánh giá xếp hạng tổng thể
  • Chất lượng bài viết
  • Cập nhật độ ổn định
  • Phát triển câu chuyện
  • Thiết kế nhân vật
  • Bối cảnh thế giới
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EspersLv6
EspersLv6Lv3

I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write. I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well. He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc. Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped? But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning. The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ... I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series: "Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot). This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand. Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist. The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere. The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life. In short, there are many errors of writing (not English). Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story). In short, I do not recommend the story. The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.

Nik_16
Nik_16Lv2

I decided to review this so as to clear some myths. Some idiots who read few initial chapters made some claims about this novel. This is for future readers so that they don't get duped. True this novel is similar to Astral pet store..... about 60-70% similar but not same or exactly similar. Those who haven't read astral pet store don't have to concern themselves with any nonsense and just read this. This novel isn't like other popcorn system novels out there. System isn't OP and helps(or tortures) MC in regards only to pet/pet shop. MC is sensible and not arrogant dickhead. Characters have decent personality. Power system is well defined. World building has some serious potential. Also there are some cliche plots here so though not a perfect but an enjoyable read. Now coming to those who have read Astral pet store. I am currently at chapter 447(reading MTL after chapter 351). If you read this novel for few chapters you may think it is same but it isnt if you read it to the latest chapter i.e. 90. MC's personality here and in astral pet store is quiet different and also his sister. the backstory behind the sibling's relationship is different. The circumstances of their parents is also different and also the family friend, there is no1 in astral pet store. The connections MC has in this novel is different than in Astral pet store, girls here are falling for MC slowly unlike in Astral pet store where we don't have anything of such sorts yet. Now talking about events.... events are similar but in essence different. The exhibition match is different. There is no Momomga in that novel. MC has all together different pets as compared to astral pet store. The relationship between MC and angelina is quite different than their counterparts in astral pet store. Also the extent of Angelina's power, her mobility all these are completely different as in astral pet store. Even the current event of inheritance is entirely different if readers have read though the thing about inheritance is similar. The allies and the enemies MC has are also different. I have mentioned all those things that this novel is different than astral pet store...... One could say this is a fan fic of that novel or inspired from that novel. If you binge read this novel then it will appear to be entirely same but if you read it carefully and give this novel time then you will know that ideas are similar but execution is entirely different. Events are similar but what exactly happens is entirely different. So it doesn't matter if you have read astral pet store or not this novel is a good read. Also the grammar, writing style, narrations is much better in this novel..... Only thing i felt is astral pet store has better and exciting action scenes which this novel lacks but i think that it is just 90 chapters so we might see better action in future....

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