Consume Me In This New World

Great work I can say. It's a masterpiece though it has few chapters. Looking forward to more from you author👌👌👌Wish the best of luck👌😍😍😍😍

With the little chps released, i was attached to the book. i wanted more, hope the author updates. When i saw the cover, i though it was going to be something like 'wakanda' but reading the sypnosis, it wasn't. The writing of the author is also good, captivating i may say. I like this book. [img=recommend]

It's great! I'm not familiar with VR games. But this novel didn't fail to amaze me. I felt like entering a new world as I proceed to read the story. It was written in a very descriptive way which made it easier for me to grasp the concepts. The writing quality is really good. It's a big plus. The story is constructed in a way that would attract the readers. The world background is amazing. Overall, it was a good read for me. Author, you're very talented and creative. Keep up the good work! I wish you the best of luck!

It's a solid and interesting story that takes readers into a new futuristic world. The grammar is solid and the writing is good. I'd advise the author to use more description of what the location looks like, what the characters look like, and more description of what the background world is like.

An unique story even though i rarely found or read fantasy genre with game theme inside, but Author's imagination is very high and amazing. Thank you for your review yesterday, i'm sorry because i was a quite busy so i delayed to review your book. Keep writing, Author

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

This novel has the typical character background that is popular in anime where the main character lives a mundane life then gets stuck in a game and become op, but it's truly admirable how uniquely depicted the novel is. Being an anime and manga lover, it'd be great to read this as a manga. While the grammar is far from perfect, the author's intentions for the characters are clear and I see this being a fun and comedic novel. [img=recommend]

The story is interesting and adds a twist to the ordinary VR game genre that usually is sometimes generic. I only read the first two chapters but find the story interesting so far. Keep up the good work!

☺️☺️ While reading the book, I was actually lost that I couldn't know what's happening around me😂😂 All thanks to your interesting book author. can't wait for the chapters coming up. keep it going dear author

To be honest, it's really great. The name Ishikawa is beautiful just like the cover of the novel. The character design is so well made. I can see the author really enjoy himself writing this, every words were so enjoyable to read except...please cut down the length of paragraph, the long paragraphs made a reader(me) panicked. Yep, that's all. There's no other-- There's one more thing, the author...please write more!! 10/10🏆💟💕

I always enjoy this authors work, but last time I did he stopped writing it. I hope he doesn't do that again. If he does I will probably stop reading his work

This story looks like most of other but you honestly get hooked reading it because of how the author wrote it. The MC's personality is really transparent so you know what kind of guy he is in the get go. I'm sure as this novel continues it will be more amazing that it is right now. Can't wait for the next chapter. Good job author.

This story is great and the author has a fantastic way of telling the story. On overall, the story is easy to read and I find the storyline quite intriguing. The world seems easy to understand so far. Keep it up, author!

Wow, just wow. I love this story, I love the word choice and I love the details. I just hope he doesn't stop writing this like he did with Is it wrong to pick up cat girls in another world. That was good too yet he just stopped writing it.

There’s definitely potential in this story. I can see how you described everything with care, and from the way the story is progressing, I have a feeling that our MC will definitely be the strongest. Plus, the character design is good, I can actually feel and understand part of his personality through a few lines. However, dont forget to work on dividing your paragraphs s bit more. Your story is good the way it is, but doing that would help mobile readers a lot. I’ll continue rooting for you :).

I went through all chapters and they were amazing to read, I love the style the Author has when writing this down, it shows so much talent gifted within the author . I have no complaints at all. Good job!!! Hoping to see more chapters and more books from you keep the good work going.

I'll leave you an honest review. There isn't much to say except working on your paragraphs and quotations (when a character is speaking). Your paragraphs are way too long so I suggest separating them, let's say about 3-4 lines for each paragraph. Secondly, when a character is speaking, you should leave that sentence on its own, don't mix it into the paragraph. Also, use Grammarly as it assists with things like sentence construction, grammar, and punctuation. Overall, the story has potential and I believe that although our ML is a level one player, he'll get stronger some day. All the best to you.

This review will be based on the little I've read so far. Author's writing style is beautiful as he carefully places out his descriptions. The story in general is interesting. From what I've learned about the synopsis It's sort of an isekai into a MMORPG. I can't wait for more releases ! 🔥