Item: Consume Me In This New World
Rating: 5
Author: Soun_Phavin

Soun_PhavinLv103yr

2022-01-08 00:47

To be honest, it's really great. The name Ishikawa is beautiful just like the cover of the novel. The character design is so well made. I can see the author really enjoy himself writing this, every words were so enjoyable to read except...please cut down the length of paragraph, the long paragraphs made a reader(me) panicked. Yep, that's all. There's no other-- There's one more thing, the author...please write more!! 10/10🏆💟💕

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CorwynGentryAuthor

Thank you so much that means so much from someone with a million views and 96 chapters. Most people have said the same thing about cutting down the paragraph length and you are all right. In the fifth chapter, I will cut them down from 100 words each to 50. Again thank you so much I promise much more to come.

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