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First Meeting

A young girl who's beauty is like no other is sitting on the shed, she have pale skin and a curvy body, pointed nose, long eyelashes, thin lips and beautiful eyes, her black hair is so straight, long and shiny. While scrolling through her cellphone, she received a message from her best friend. "Sweety, me and my brother will be able come at your party tonight, but is it okay for him to bring his friend?". Sweety replied with a smile on her face "Sure, see u later Jane".

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It's Chinese new year, and the Hanz family love to celebrate in this occasion so they invited their business partners, and familuy friends to attend their party as a celebration to Chinese new year. Inside, the Frenz Hotel, which is the number one hotel in US, you can see a lot of important persons and well-known entrepreneurs everywhere. The party is about to begin in thirty minutes, by then, a beautiful young girl went out of the BMW car and became the center of attraction. She is wearing long red dress, which is off shoulder, and everyone can see her back. Most of the time, women wear dresses that can show their cleavage so they can attract attention, but this young girl can attract attention without even trying. She wore simple make up, and you can see how natural her beauty is, her long eyelashes, thin lips, pointed nose and curvy body is a knock-out. Sweety walk to the entrance. When she entered, she began to attract all their attention. "Oh, isn't she the eldest daughter of Hanz Family?" the middle-aged woman ask. "Yes, she look so stunning, but I heard you can't mess up with her, she is not easy to deal with." another middle-aged woman answered. "Indeed, we should greet her, this is their party anyway." The two middle-aged woman did greet her and sweetie just smiled at them and greet them too as a form of respect. While sweetie is talking with the other guess, someone called her "Sweety, I miss you, it's been a long time". When Sweety saw her, she gave her a hug and said "I miss you too, so, where is your brother and his friend?". Jane took a glass of wine and pointed her finger at the corner near the entrance "There they are, wait for me here, I'll call them."

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"okay".

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"Sweety, here they are"

Sweety took a glance at Jane's brother then to his friend, the man looks like he is in his twenty's, he is tall, white, and handsome, his body is perfect, his mouth is thin, have pointed nose, and cold look, his presence can be compared to a king.

"Hello, my name is Nash, nice to meet you."

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"Hello, I'm sweety, nice to meet you too."

They smiled at each other and shakes hands.

Hey guys. This is my first time writing a novel. I am not really good at this yet, but hopefully, you can help me with this. Give me a feedback either negative or possitive, so I can make some arrnagements and do some changes if there is something wrong (*´∇`*)Thank you so much.= ̄ω ̄=

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