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BonEs, FlamEs and IcE (DROPPED VERSION)

Tác giả: Jujumaster
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What is BonEs, FlamEs and IcE (DROPPED VERSION)

Đọc tiểu thuyết BonEs, FlamEs and IcE (DROPPED VERSION) của tác giả Jujumaster được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Magic, Mana and Mystical Beasts. Romance and Love.Betrayal, Blood and Death. These elements contribute to form the Mysteries of the world.Gerald Zheng was burdened with heavy tasks after the death of ...

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Magic, Mana and Mystical Beasts. Romance and Love. Betrayal, Blood and Death. These elements contribute to form the Mysteries of the world. Gerald Zheng was burdened with heavy tasks after the death of his father, the emperor of Camelot. His family was scattered. Competitors of his birth right sort to take his life in order to claim what is rightfully his. Zheng had to leave his home continent, away from all the drama. He will begin his journey to build strength, to be the mightiest man on Earth, on a continent foreign to him. Only by gaining might can he right the wrongs. FEAR THE RETURN OF ZHENG!

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I was the Villain in the book

Have you ever read a book where you are crying so much like you know there is so much more to the story than what it was written. I was reading this book that my sister bought today and has finished it overnight. I was so hooked that I finished it and cried so much but not for the heroine. The heroine got it all and had a happy ending. She ended up with the Prince by her side and people continue to worship her and support their relationship. But what the hell, I was crying so much for the villain. She died in the end of the book and I was hurting so much for her. Overall if you put yourself in her shoes does she really deserve to die?, she did bully the heroine in their school days and humiliated her in public but the heroine was never alone. The Prince was always by her side and the people loved her. I believe in second chances and the villain’s part, I wanted to know if she ever regretted it. It was not mentioned in the book because the book only revolves around the heroine alone. What about the other characters ? I was crying so much for the villain because she died and her killer was the heroine but people closed their eyes to that fact that the heroine is her killer and engraved it in their minds that she deserved it. It was already 3 in the morning and I was here in my room crying alone. I suddenly heard a voice "If you could go back, would you still want to be yourself?" I stopped sobbing and started to freaked out. Chills run down my spine because like what the heck. I am all alone in my room and I suddenly heard a faint voice I looked around looking for the voice then I blacked out.

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The_critcal_thinkaLv1The_critcal_thinka

Another work from Jujumaster. This writing in this one is miles better than the other novels that he has written. Conventionally, the MC of the novel is introduced first. Stories of side characters aren't given much shine. Although it is still early to speak, BONES FLAMES AND ICE seems to indulge in making side characters memorable and not a one-off object. Still some glitches in writing, I think twice within the five chapters but you won't notice AT all because of how indulging the story is. Juju pls make the MC a dragon

WriterTheos
WriterTheosLv13WriterTheos

Writing a review after the first chapter. To me, the first half of it was nothing but a big info dump. A history lesson. In the first chapter you need to focus on the most important stuff: The main character. their foundation, their will, their ambition, their drive, what they want, why they want it, who they are. That's what matters since that is why the readers are most likely reading your story. Instead we got a ton of history I fo about the warring nations, when none of that was really nessecary. if we started at the end with those soldiers and the mage, then everything could slowly be revealed throughout the story, not just dumped onto you at the start. still, the ending was good so I liked it overall.

mattfuncool
mattfuncoolLv5mattfuncool

The author of this book is on the path of greatness with this story. I just need to update always, give a little more details, and don't forget to double-check for any mistakes.

Daynightdreamer
DaynightdreamerLv11Daynightdreamer

It's still too early to tell but the book has some promise. I would like for the author to create an auxiliary chapter for the timelines because I got lost a bit in the first chapter, trying to keep a sense of what happened when without getting lost in the weeds. And work on your transitions from scene to scene..Nice use of vocabularies and all the best. Some minor issues here and there disappear with time. All the best

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