"Screw magic, I want to learn how to do cool flips and stuff." Magic is awesome, until you've studied it for centuries. Doevm reincarnates into a human to experience the path of a fighter to its fullest and swears not to rely on magic. There is only one problem, a goddess stands in his way. She pits him against both the hero and the villain for all of eternity. How will he escape this, with magic or his fists? Maybe both? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(Sorry about the spacing. Webnovel doesn't let me use enter) Winner of contest #110. I upload three chapters a week. Each chapter has word count around 1000+.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Link to my discord: https://discord.gg/tHaceja ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------While I am an experienced writer, I do make mistakes. Don't be afraid to say you don't understand something or point out an error in grammar. I read all comments. There are naturally some things I won't say. For example, if some says there's an inconsistency and I don't address it, it's probably there for a reason.
'He looks mad,' Olpi thought.
Frey stormed up to the others. Fresh blood and sweat dripped off his armor. He took deep breaths, trying to calm himself from the rush of battle, but when he eyed Olpi his breaths quickened. He tore his gaze away from her. Elero was the immediate concern. "I've never heard you scream like that."
Elero shrugged. "And I've never seen you fall for such a basic trap. Were you distracted by something, or better someone?" She glanced at Olpi.
Frey scoffed. "One moment I see you going to help Olpi, and the next moment you're on the ground screaming your lungs out. What if you had died?"
"I'm fine."
Frey nodded a few times, then turned to Olpi. His hands clenched and unclenched. He was calming down, but not fast enough. "I heard you say 'watch out', meaning you had enough time to warn Elero. Why didn't you just cancel the spell?"