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I'm not a fan story about superheroes too much, but here I was getting into the story. The way writer wrote was such unique way, I wasn't that used to it so sometimes it confuse me and make me read the sentence one more time. But overall that was engaging story, very interesting one at that. I think the plot was moving toward more like, bad boy netflix series but I looking forward what an author about to offer. Nice work with a good plot, and a lot of interesting characters. It would be awesome if the story continue. Keep it up!

The personalities are superbly described by the author. Writer, please continue. Excellent writing and an engaging story. I think the character development has been good. And reading about it for a long time is enjoyable since it keeps the reader interested. The entire concept of your book seems intriguing; it is different, the plot is nice, and it is distinctive in the same manner. I've never read a story like this before. This story has potential, in my opinion. write more chapters, dear author. Keep going.

Really nice and interesting concept and characters. Love your unique style of writing which uses the play script format instead of prose as your medium, making the scenes act out. Good work!

It's a superhero story with a twist and a different setting. As for the writing and grammar, I think the author is new, but it is readable in its state. It needs prose and hopefully, the author can learn as he grows. I'm looking forward to reading this, good luck author-kun

I think this superhero story is rather generic, but if you like these types of magical and unique worlds, then this book is definitely for you. It wasn't bad, and overall rather good. I think that this would be a could story as long as the author develops each character uniquely.

A superhero book. Count me in. The way that it's written and the excitement is way too exciting to not make this book a keeper.

A well designed book, that catches the attention of the readers. I highly recommend and appreciate your book. This is great work.

Great book, at the start its hard to get a gist of the story, but it get easier the more you progress, I like the way the author added his culture into the novel which brings some kind of uniqueness into it, and I do really enjoy reading it, I would love though to have a description of they location sometimes so I can imagine where they are right now

Interesting find, this story is quite unique in its own right. As a super hero story I also find this one as refreshing. I have no problem with the writing quality. It's good and the characters are described properly. You have made a good solid story. Keep up the good work!

I find the book really amazing, the English is clear and easy to understand. I also love the way the Author blended his culture into this book looking forward to more updates.

love the characters. easy to read. liked the progress of it. good job

It's a new and unique concept. I liked how the author tried to embed his culture and values into the book, which made it stand out. But I prefer it much better if there are few fine details on the world background, as it makes it easy for the reader to imagine the scene flow and such. I felt the chapters were too short. Overall, I liked the unique concept. Fighting author!!!

The book is really easy to read, love the way the writer writes, the book is really intriguing starting from the start... Can't wait until keep on reading... Do keep on updating author

First the good things, the dialogues are very good and fun to read, the English is fine, easy to understand, and no grammar mistakes. The concept of the story is good. The only negatives (I am assuming it is not fanfiction and all characters are original) I think you should explain them like their appearance, personality, etc so that reader can form a mental image of them.