Joshan_Jo

The story is interesting and is a potential one, however I need to say there is a lack of description at places, which makes it hard to imagine when reading. Also, at some places, it's confusing, like it's just happening because MC wants to do it without any motivation behind his actions, also, the first chapter is a bit confusing. So if the author could spare some time to edit the initial chapters, I can say it will reach more audience. Keep up the good work author

instead of directly coming to dialogue, maybe we can add a para or two explaining the world background he teleported to

omg!! this is such a nice carefully pieced para

Overall, the story is good and so far it's interesting. The writing quality is also good and the character designing and development is also going smoothly. The author did a good job in giving descriptions about world background and I enjoyed reading this novel. Keep up the good work author

I liked the fl character, who is strong and stands for herself. The story paced well and the author did a good job in describing. The character designing is good, as well as the writing quality. Overall, it's a good story and worth one's time. Keep up the good work author

lol

yup...so be afraid of crazy ppl, hehe

it isn't

it's isn't

duh.....