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'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

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What is 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

Đọc tiểu thuyết 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms của tác giả squirtle_sqaud_z được xuất bản trên WebNovel.' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has se...

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' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has sent her to earth for sake of defending the World by many aliens . Despite being a busy division leader, there she will be pretend to be a student ,will be Giving tests , capturing monsters , deals with human relationships and resolving conflicts between different species. Find Out how she deals with it , from the first chapter.

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The lady's step are measured and deliberate, each one purposeful and confident. Her hips swaying ever so slightly as she walks down the hall to the meeting room. All eyes were on her, she holds her head high, her confidence radiating from every step she takes. She wearing a form fitting red dress that hugs her curves in all the right places. The dress has a simple, elegant cut, and the fabric shimmers in the light. On the left shoulder, there's a small logo embroidered in silver thread. It's the logo of a high end fashion designer. The dress is short and sleek, ending just above the knee, she was wearing a pair of black heels, adding even more height to her already statuesque frame. The overall effect is striking and chic, with a touch of glamour. The lady's hair is pulled back in a sleek bun, exposing her delicate features. Her makeup is natural and understated, letting her natural beauty shine through. As she push the door of the meeting room open, all eyes fell on her and there was little murmuring "who could she be that she has to disturb an important meeting ". As she walks into the meeting room, hee heels click clack on the floor making everyone to keep quiet. She went to the person she wanted to see "The meeting is over " without looking back. An air of command and authority filled the room. Then the young man wave his hand and before a minutes everyone left the room leaving the both of them alone. She threw the file she had in her hand onto the table infront of the man, who looked up at her with a curious expression. "You want to marry me ", this is the lady who knows what she wants, and she not afraid to go after it. "We can get married", she said, hee voice was calm and collected, "on one condition". The man sat back in his chair,his face expressionless "what's the condition?". He asked, he voice was low and even. The tention in the room was palpable, as the two stared at each other, neither willing to back down... In the book Ava'deal , The rich, powerful , sucessful young lady with a mysterious one-night stand, She had to give up the simple joys of childhood to prepare for a life of responsibility and duty. It gives her a sense of sadness and regret, but also shows her strength and determination to succeed in her role. Her brother who suddenly have interest to claim the company, then during a lunch meeting her dad told her she was getting married after all she been through, her dad decides to kick her to one side of the bar and the deal that she strikes with the guy to get back what's hers. I can imagine all sorts of twists and turns as the story unfolds. Will she find out the identity of the mysterious man? Will her brother take the company from her? Will the deal with the guy go as planned, or will something unexpected happen? I can't wait to find out what happens next!

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Ryu Jintao reincarnated in an alternate Earth where humans mysteriously disappear all over the world. Predicting his possible fate, he lives his life while rigorously preparing himself for his inevitable second transmigration. At the age of 20, he too gets transported to an apocalyptic survival game from a novel that he once read - 'Reincarnator'. Equipped with his novel knowledge, Jintao stops at nothing to use this chance given to him to become a supreme existence of that world. At one point he eventually discovers that because he lived two different lives, he's someone with two special traits, and both are very powerful. .... Warning: In short, the MC is a villain. He's often cruel and very evil. For benefits, he might backstab his 'allies', lure them into a trap and do all kinds of amoral things, so be prepared for things like this. In certain situations he resembles Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity, and I often reference RI as I write this story. Second warning: Even though the MC is evil, pragmatic and scheming in his actions, he isn't a psychopathic emo kid. Don't expect him to always murder everyone he meets. He acts neutral in most situations and might even be genuinely kind if it doesn't hinder his goals or if he feels like it. He would have a lover or a few, and perhaps even a harem, since his strength allows that; though romance is really not the focus here and the girls he chooses would not be useless weaklings. Third warning: One of MC's traits is greatly enhanced Luck (which reveals itself mainly in the form of him dropping more rare runes, skills and artifacts than others), so don't be too surprised when the MC's drops are quite lucky. But his luck trait isn't omnipotent. The main reason I chose this trait is because I want the MC to acquire many various skills, which I always find cool.

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Cindersen
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Whoa. How did this get so many votes when the story is inspired by One Punch Man and this isn't a fan fiction inspired contest? Not to mention, it has poor writing with frequent lack of proper capitalization, punctuation, and overall correct sentence structure. The mistakes are so blatantly obvious that it makes me wonder if the reviewers who gave this such high ratings are in elementary school or something. My advice would be to use Grammarly or learn how to write better basic English because this grammar is pretty bad and detracts from any semblance of a story. I would have given you a one, but you tried, so two for effort. I hope you take my advice seriously in order to improve your story and writing.

Lazy_Prince
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Legio9
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AuroraAzure
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Umm.. I'm only here because the author commented to me on IRAS randomly to check out their novel. It was out of the blue since it was off of a balloon gift comment of mine, but I was curious and checked it out anyway. But the writing is just okay for me? I'm not into anime and I can't follow the story well because I think the formatting got messed up? Oh well you told me to check it out so I did. Good luck with your story I suppose? 😅 Sorry I can't give more feedback because I can't follow the story that well, and it's only 4 chapters long...... Guerilla advertising on translated novels is probably not a good idea haha. I was surprised by the reply. 😆

julis
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Sorry but I expected better from a story voted third in the contest. Writing mistakes are all over the place. It doesn't even look like it's being seriously written because sentences are cut off before the end and appear on another paragraph. Grammar is completely off. That just shows lack of care for properly typing and reviewing your work before uploading. There are other stories which at least proofread their work better than this. The story is also based off one punch man, so it's not really original like the other stories too. This is just my honest opinion. If I were to give you a real score on what this story deserves, it would be a 1-2 star max, no offense. Keep writing and studying proper English to get better. But I have a feeling that once this contest is over, you're just going to drop this story like many others who just join the contest for the SS prize. But I hope you do continue so that you can get better.

RedNight
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I am giving you four to encourage you, and this rating in no way reflects on the story itself. If you want me to give you a honest rating, it would be one, and this one rating is due to your desire to write. Write more, learn more, from a fellow author who started at the bottom just like you.

Kalindi_Dalvi_8389
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Amazing writting quality almost no spelling mistakes Stability of updating is also good enough for 5 stars And story development is better than first chapter and The mc's development was very nice. And world background was awesome👏✊👍👏✊👍 pretty awesome book.

squirtle_sqaud_z
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The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so

kkiyumno
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I saw the author comment on many novels to check out his novel, so I did. The grammar made the novel so hard to read that I could barely understand anything. Also, the idea of combining multiple different animes and stories doesn’t sit well with me. The contest is not fan fiction. Many supporters say that the grammar mistakes are a unique ‘style’, but I think they’re just mistakes. I would suggest proofreading your chapters more, checking grammar, and ensuring that it’s easier to understand what’s happening and more detail.

Kalindi_Dalvi
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Kavita_Tawde
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Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !!

Waman_Dalvi
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terminerfers_TM
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You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it

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Vijay_Tawde
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!!!! I am speechless !!!!Amazing it's super super super amazing I like one punch girl series very much and world background also good nothing more to say but I will contribute to make it win the contest

vaman_dalvi
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Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite

MarcoDao
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It's not bad of a story, the author has a lot of chapters written which is very commendable I believe. The major issue I have though is that there's not much in the way of decent sentence construction or punctuation making the reading experience very messy. I'm sure English is not the author's first language so I'd recommend him to get someone to help him edit before publishing. Other than that: your premise is good, but it relies too much on me knowing comic books and Anime references of which I only know about half of those things. I'd suggest that you make an original character/villain or two and maybe explain how all the universes appeared in this earth (unless I missed a chapter or two then don't worry about this). Otherwise yeah

Bittu_Dada
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Amazingly awesome its dope bro most savage book ever read its very nice all since the prolouge to all the chaps ahead must have 5 stars and also support of power stone you should also give him piwer stone trust me its worth it......

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