Great story, creative author, awesome world-building.
It is a great fanfiction, actually it could be the best I read about HP. Especially the charachters and the world building are top notch and reallly fun to read. Thank you for the great story author!
Tbh, the world building is pretty good, but the progression is slowed down by the excessive explaining and details. Not to mention that its really hard to tell whether im reading thoughts, or someone talking.