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Great story so far. I'm really enjoying it and I always get bummed when I reach the last chapter that's been posted

Helldivers & WarHammer 40k is a match made in heaven.. so funny really,,, sometimes I even forgot the True MC and just go with Helldivers.

This is an absolutely amazing story, 10/10. Mr author man, can you give the protagonist a love interest? Anything really, mabye even riven?👉🏻👈🏻

honestly, I'm really enjoying this. I honestly don't know why it doesn't have more recognition, the writing is great, the pace of the story is neither too fast or too slow and the fights are good. keep it up author 🤙🏻

The novel in itself is good. It is interesting and with a kind of original spin, but it also has dialogue which is made by ai, and by that i mean “question-answer” type of dialogue which is too overused everywhere. But if you turn off your brain for dialogue, the novel feels like a nice read. +it has long chapters

This is one of the better 7 Days to Die System TWD Fic I've read, ngl I ignored this cause I thought it's the same one I've read before. The MC is likeable and the system didn't make him overly OP. The bloodmoon is incorporated well here as well.

Absolute 5 stars! I've read many Douluo fanfics, and this one is right at the top of my list. Yes, it follows the wish-fulfillment trope, but the author executes it so masterfully that it feels like a masterpiece.

I must say that I am sad that this hasn't been continued, I have enjoyed this story very much in the times that I read it, and I hope to one day see future updates.

This story was beautiful. There are issues as always, cuz nobody can be perfect, but this story is one of the best fanfics on this app and deserves the recognition. I personally don't like the ending, but it is well written and I won't lie and say it's bad. Now for people who care about ratings. Writing quality will be a 3 for me for multiple reasons. Some of the paragraphs are just too long and too much info dumping it would feel much cleaner to have paragraphs. Also there were a decent amount of spelling and grammar mistakes. Not like the typical translation stories, and its absolutely within reason, but there were enough to notice. But it did have good vocabulary and the mistakes personally didn't stop me from comprehending anything. Story development is a 5. Although I do have personal preference issues, it is a very well written story. I'm not sure about pacing, since sometimes it felt very fast, and sometimes very slow and sometimes perfect. Character Design will be a 4. I absolutely adore the Main Characters. And I think the enemies are intriguing even tho, the enemies are mostly one dimensional. For that and the imo not really reasonable presentation of a dark 100 year old Harry, I will give it only 4. Update stability will be 5, cuz it's finished as of this review, so yh. World background will be a 3. Yes there was some exploration in many directions regarding world building, but for me they came up short, and don't have an active impact on the presence imo.

I really like this book update pls it has a really thought out plot and characters with nice pacing and I’m interested to see what happens next

Very well written overall. Isn’t AI, which puts it a step above half the fan fiction on this site, and not a translation. 9.5/10 highly recommend.

10/10 writing and other stuff but that's not important the important thing is why does this have the mha tag

Very interesting and satisfying Tang San, Tang Hao, and Yu Xiaogang face slapping. Yes it's been a common trope now, but still. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I really enjoy this book, I keep coming back to it. It’s always engaging(even when the author thinks it’s not). The chapters are long and the updates are frequent. I never get the feeling that the story is over because so much gets added so frequently. Now for the rating. The world building for me is a 10/10 I feel like I understand everything around the main character and I never have too many questions. The progression I would rate a 10/10 (this one is hella subjective) I love the pacing. It feels just right. The mc grows not too fast and not too slow. The author does a great job of keeping the multiverse stuff clean and simple so it’s not overwhelming. I’ve never been a fan of level based progression because it feels like it dominates everything about a character but the mc has so many skills at his disposal that the leveling aspect is actually a cherry on top. There were many plot twists I never expected and I was always entertained reading this book. And my last rating is going to be for the side characters. They may be “side characters” but damn does the author make you care about them. They aren’t emotionless and do feel like that have real thoughts, and that just makes this read feel a whole lot cleaner. Overall, absolutely fantastic work.

It is acutally a decent read. Orochimarus personality is not completely wrong, though it is very strange that he doesn't show any interest in technology, since even that technology there is superior is many ways to the general techbology in the ninja world, only Orochimaru himself being superior in a few fields. But he didn't even have a flicker of interest towards it, besides that it isn't too bad in this regard, a few tiny mistakes here and there, like we got an explanation why his pet was sold originally due to the upkeeping costs(which is not little for an ordinary wizard in an ordinary job), endresult is that we later got to know the former Owner is a pureblood who doesn't seem to lack money. Or we have a scene where he threw away his kitchenknive, and then drove away, it was even especially mentioned that this is the end of that kitchenknive, just to have him later pack the kitchenknive, would be okay if he would have got himself a new one, but we don't have a single sentence saying he got himself one in any way. And a few others, but overall if you are not a very logic oriented person, you probably won't even notice it.

This is a good noval, I can see author put lots of thaught into writing this, this noval mainly explore spiritual side of magic which is good and fits the theme of HP with its love magic but it is lot different than i expected... I was expecting more of memory, mind magic exploration... anyways this one of the good noval to read. good work author 👍

Can’t wait to see more of this. This is really good. I haven’t seen a fallout fan affect from the school in a long time and I would love to see more.

I really like this story as it doesn't show not too much Harem and also gives a good growth for MC compared to others where he is OP from the beginning. No system is also good and his A.I chip is better and not knowing the story make it better for him to prepare rather than paranoid.

I need more of this in my life IDK how almost all of the MHA fanatics seem to have some of the best stories but they do and this one is easily climbing to the top.

Very nice, I hope the author continues the story as we have a dire lack of abyss pathway fanfics on this site.

updates everyweek and has amazing character interactions and how he depicts his MC which make it really interesting and entertaining it's a beautiful story in its own way honestly really unique at least to me and I'm glazing but it's well deserved