I know I'm early, but this novel is quite good in my opinion, it neither makes it long nor short, the characters are very good, it reflects the character's emotions and expressions very well, the author's quotes were very nice, there are some problems but I hope they will be fixed, nice novel

Fantastic novel, I read it and I found a new world, fantastic story, I immersed myself a lot in the protagonist and every word I read was a new emotion... 10/10

The novel is so good, keep your hard work and I am sure you will achieve great things

I just looked at it as a suggestion and it's a really good novel. Yes, there are some mistakes in it, but it's very understandable, it's good, whether in terms of characters or in terms of subject, it has the potential to be a peak, and I hope there will be more chapters. 🙏

So far I really like this novel. It has a amazing beginning, a good plot so far, good writing, good MC and at the part it’s at right now is amazing 🔥💯 I would rate this novel a 10/10 ✍️💯👍

Frankly, I like it, read it, read it, the author seems to have tried, I liked it. It means that you know that you are not your type to love, but I will be glad if you do positive things Yours regards elloland costa :D

Drop this now - Thou mongrel does not know English , tis might have been the peasants first time ✍️. Let’s go over a few details shall we.- first thing I noticed was the slaves wordplay…one should not use wordplay without knowing how to write properly in English, secondly and lastly because I do not want to waste my time uttering nonsense about a trash novel, so on to the next one. Thou May not have been educating thyself before writing ✍️, because the poor son of a harlot did not even add ‘ , ‘ which is important for people that strive to go with the story. Thanks for reading this magnificent review

Overall, the this novel have great potential. But there are some mistakes like the translation error and And I just feel like everything is going too fast But the emotional impact is pretty low.

The novel is pretty good for a start; there are some mistakes, but it's probably the author's first novel. It's quite well done, and the main character is well-written. I've noticed some differences as well, like when casting a spell, usually a circle appears with a star inside it, but in this novel, a set of symbols comes out of the hands instead. I believe it will become a top-tier novel 🔥🙏