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2024-08-18 06:28

Even though my rating is not very high I do enjoy this novel throughly. The reason behind my ratings will be explained following: World background- never actually established we can only guess as the reader it takes place in the real world with only four locations named two of which are schools and the final two being towns/cities, Updating Stability- actually falls under the category of being unable to be defined by a star rating due to being a new novel, Character Design- Currently few details are given about any character and character growth seems to be minimal currently (new novel), Story Development- There has been some degree of development however I feel there as also been a step backwards [in regards to the step backwards: Day two of the new school shows a side character having a showdown with the main character in the form of a question however it was established on day one that no other student besides the main character was able to answer the most difficult physics question on the previous test. This all comes together as a waste of time and needlessly added to fill space (if the author were to rework this as to having this class take part prior to the test answer review or state it as the other student was absent the issue would be solved. Overall it is not an actual major issue and easy to overlook)], Writing Quality-So far there have been no issues with name disassociation, or translation errors (as far as I am aware) meaning this novel is leagues above others.

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I hope author continues to work with this novel. I would like to see how it turns out.

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also my review is subject to change with the introduction of new story development, release times, and rewriting (if it occurs).

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