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my bad thought I read earlier it was D rank thanks for the clarity

"taking too long" eggs have one of the quickest cook times out of everything you could potentially cook

d rank rock hound

fr stuck just when something good was bout to happen. whoever the author is, is a master of suspense.

I would like to start out by saying well done so far. some of the things the could use a bit of work: ensure abilities are named correctly (there has been a single instance of an ability given two different names), show character growth (so far the MC has shown no development, even if they don't change their mindset the MC could at least attempt to follow their overall goal), provid some descriptions (for the most part we know who these characters or locations are, but help us immerse ourselves not everyone will be aware of the actual story) . other than that the only complaint I have is there isn't enough story I keep reading as soon as it's released, but take your time it's great so far. overall I would recommend the story it's a bit slow but that is to be expected to allow growth and development while following a dedicated storyline.

bro there is no story at all. it's just . and the chapter is done. at least look before you try to bot someone.

it was only two days he started at night. meaning he used night 1 day 1 night 2 day 2 night 3 finished.

loved the mutated idea, very fresh nice change of pace.

oh very creative love the idea nit of being paste, but the application to be a trap with the barrier.

always makes me laugh how frequently people just sign without reading. There was a game in the past that gave a bogus joke terms and conditions then followed with a secondary page asking if we actually read it and then finally the real terms and conditions. I can only assume that at least 50,000 people signed that without reading it due to the game selling more than 100,000 copies.