50points

ohhh repeat chapter

when did she stand up from the bed and grab the door?

always makes me laugh when someone thinks a 360 is positive to neg or the other way around. a 360 is a complete ticket meaning it ends in the starting race or no change. a 180 is turn in the opposite direction. Just have to make sure we are all on the same page with angles of rotation.

Author pushed out the same story just a slightly different title.

the flowers will attract bees which can assist in pollination of other plants as well.

mud, cover your body in mud it is a natural odor naturalizer and it also repels bugs like the little blood suckers from biting.

Jackie Chan Adventures was great as a kid!

writing quality: not bad a couple of issues here and there, but overall better than most. Updating Stability : new novel give it some time. world background: never actually mentioned, but the reader can make vague guesses. story development: rather slow and somethings seem to appear out of nowhere. characters: little to no descriptions depicting themselves. Also development currently is unable to grade due to story being new. overall not a bad story or idea if you will. I do recommend giving it a read. We do need some clarification on Aoi age otherwise some content could lead novel into trouble.

when did she get her own room?

isn't that the same description given to Aoi's cat form?