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see this is just boring they are already old what's the point? nah if you want to be evil you need to do it to someone younger. not a baby not enough emotional attachment, but a teen, young adult. someone that has reached a location in their life that has enough social presence to impact a larger group.

only question is how did he fail? out of 100 people how many do you think visit orphanages? Not a lot of witnesses there, feels like a setup to me.

ummmm author static shock already exist

plagiarism hm just makes me think tax evasion, Jaywalking, or disturbing the peace

tag him back! I say we break his legs

smack what?

I thought it was B rank meditation...

her? Kate was a boy for the last 19 chapters. -.- Author come on, please all you have to do is look over what you wrote. I would assume you know what a review is. when one looks over what they wrote to check content.

they have cars? I understand what you are trying to relay to us the reader, but how would he know what a car is?