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Well first it’s a bit too rushed for me reads more like a summary than a story. Second 4 chapters in and he is thinking with his D already in your first story i could tolarate since I was interested in the powerprogression but here it ticks me off. Also he doesn’t have human hormones so things that manly happen bc of hormones and not bc of thought (like morals should behave differently) Also the fact that he wants a harem is different than actively going for it or it just happening wanting one in your head is one thing going for it makes me question his character and it happening is a result of majin having a different culture. Also I hope there will be no reincarnators und the harem since that would be very hard to believe. Well this is mostly a rant about the things that would destroy the novel for me sorry if it’s all over the place.

I am Rimuru Tempest (Rewrite Version)

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That's fair. The pacing might not be for everyone. However, I didn't want to waste time writing stuff that everyone was already pretty familiar with in the first two chapters. Also, for him thinking with his D? I'd have to disagree with that one. He went to the Ogre village to recruit them. He wasn't going there on a mission to catch Waifus. Though he was aware that Shion and Shuna were going to be there, and he is interested in them. He only let himself wander around and have fun once the ogres were busy discussing their plans. Right now, he is mainly focusing on setting himself up for the future.