BonVoyage
Persona is good game. So now I am writing about it.
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BonVoyage7hตอบกลับถึง RatedOverrThere will be romantic feelings. The first romance with Shuna happens pretty quickly. but I develop their relationship, and it becomes pretty clear that they both love each other. With Shion, I built it up too showing them getting closer to each other. The plan is to make them genuinely love and care about each other rather than just collect them and forget about them.
- BonVoyage7hตอบกลับถึง Angel_Of_Damnation
Is that in the Webnovel? In the light novel he has no idea that Leon is after Chloe, just otherworlder kids
"I see…" Yuuki muttered, thinking for a few moments before shrugging. "Fine, you can take them back with you if you think that's for the best. I trust your judgment enough to know you wouldn't take them anywhere dangerous." - BonVoyage16hตอบกลับถึง Dark_PersonJJ
- BonVoyage17hตอบกลับถึง Roosterbee
Vibes I was going for was showcasing the power of Tempest while still opening the arms for friendly relationships. Basically saying "We are strong, we can do a lot, but don't mess with us. We wanna be allies but we are not gonna be pushed around"
Ch 27 The Guild and the Queen. - BonVoyage18hตอบกลับถึง Roosterbee
While I have used/ used ai from time to time to help me edit/reword paragraphs from time to time, I actually was the one to write the speech myself. I intentionally used as fancy a language as I could, plus I looked up a couple of speeches from presidents and other fictional ones as reference. I guess I could tone it down a bit to make it sound more natural, but I was pretty happy with how it had turned out.
Tempest stands as a testament to the power of determination and the resilience of our people. Under the exceptional leadership of our King Rimuru Tempest, our nation has risen from the wilderness, harnessing both creativity and cutting-edge innovations to create a society that is both formidable and flourishing. - BonVoyage21hตอบกลับถึง Voidking223Walking with Shuna by his side, Rimuru called forth both her father and brother to give them their names. He named her brother Benimaru and then her father Mamoru. The two of them knelt down, vowing their loyalty to Rimuru once again.
- BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง DrojamCh 106 The Phantom Meeting.
- BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Dragowar
Thanks, my man! Honestly, it's hard to compare because they are so different, but if I had to choose which story I like more, it would be the p5 story. I have been on a writing spree for this one, but it's just because it's new, plus I have that boost going on right now with creativity. But soon enough I will be able to turn my focus back on the p5 story
Ch 1 Here We Go Again. - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง LunaKindredCh 25 Double Trouble **
- BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Dragowar
Yeah, in my persona fic I like to do the slow burn, and while I am planning on doing that here too I don't plan on taking it quite as slow. (as can be seen with Shuna lol)
"When I first married Shuna, it all went too fast. We had only met the day before, which is similar to how it is between us. We had a nice interaction, but that was about it. And though I don't regret it, I did learn something. I wished we had taken things just a bit slower. If I am being honest, I even rejected a marriage the Lizardmen Chief offered to me for that same reason." - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Aden_Harrison
They haven't been named yet so they are still ogres, they only turn into Kijin after being named
"Not gonna lie, I kind of like the horns." He caught his reflection in a nearby mirror, giving his appearance a critical once-over. With a joking smirk, he said, "At this rate, I'm going to have all the ogre girls on an FBI watchlist." - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Dragowar
Hehe, perchance
Leading these groups were Silk, leader of the evolved Ghost Spiders, and Motharella, overseeing the evolved Hades Moths. Both leaders possessed enhanced versions of the Sticky Threads and Steel Thread skills, significantly boosting silk production. - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Dragowar
I haven't read it yet. Tensura has like 50 different spin-offs lol, so I really ought to check all of them out.
As a former human now reincarnated as a slime, he still held on to some human inclinations, which he discussed with the Great Sage. Despite the Sage considering certain human features unnecessary, Rimuru had insisted on a complete transformation, unnecessary parts included. - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Dragowar
Now I can't unsee it lol. You're right
'Yeah bud, I ain't your regular monster. How about you? Must be boring getting trapped in that thing, right?' His casual tone seemed to spark another round of laughter from Veldora. - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Sidney008
Sage is already a professional parent. Fr fr
[Notice. Due to the practice done with Veldora, Great Sage has a suggestion to offer.] - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง SteelWolfAlchemist
Heck yeah! I am surprised that there are so many people still reading it. Glad to see you enjoyed it enough to reread it.
Hello there, I wanted to make this the first chapter for anyone who has ever tried giving the original version a try. I will say I looked back at it, and damn, it's bad. - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Cigarrillo_Andante
Shhhh... She is being sneaky!
"Could I hold you? I heard from Ellen that you are quite soft." - BonVoyage1dตอบกลับถึง Masked_Fairy
Veldanava married a human and then decided to give the most op skill to her brother just cuz. The Nepotism is real
[Being a Hero is exclusive to humans, Dwarves and Elves.]