meaningless, that's the feeling I get when reading this, the skills come easily, so you have no idea of progress, the characters don't even have proper dialogue, he fucked Joy and Misty in less than two chapters, he doesn't even speak they were expressed correctly, the only line I remember is Misty telling him to run from the spearrows. I don't know what others see when they read this, but I only see robotic, meaningless and hasty development.
Nishadraaj
Liked it!
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