Golias

I feel like the MC has little sense of presence, at first it was ok, but the more time passes, the more boring it gets. Klein appears too much, the plot of the tower built by Roselle is even more boring, the interaction with women is to get close without ever touching, the MC seems very Buddhist, Klein steals his things and he's ok, Klein steals his information and uses it to make money in front of him and he's ok, even the book that the MC asked the fool to check out was "censored" by Klein just because he used the relevant information to pretend at the tarot club, but the MC just shrugs it off without caring, the MC can get good things, like Creeping Hunger, but he just looks on without caring, overall he seems more like a passerby in his own story. Mc doesn't seem to have any desires or interests other than "participating" in the story as a passerby and advancing his own sequence.

Grazie

Hi, can you tell me if there is romance?

If I'm not mistaken, Klein clearly says that the disguise of the faceless one in the mushroom glove can only change the appearance, I don't remember if it's when he becomes a faceless or when he releases the faceless from the glove, but I remember him saying.

All this "comedy" is losing its charm very quickly, it's like enhancing the bad characteristics to the point of being mocking, in the original Roselle was never so explicit, I understand that Klein may not have found the right pages, but please, this kind of comedy only takes away the seriousness that a LOTM fanfic should have, it may just be my personal opinion, but as a straight person, I can't stand reading about pink men's nipples and men sucking dicks anymore.

Ah... it got tiring. The way the MC acts is normal at first, but then he becomes mocking and annoying. The narrative of the story also changed, the way the point of view keeps varying between present and past, with flashbacks or different perspectives is acceptable at first, but due to a great increase in the use of this type of writing it becomes annoying. Finally, the story got boring, his interaction with the other characters became kind of... pointless? Well, at least that's what I feel. In any case, what used to make me excited now just makes me tired, trying to keep progressing to wait for an improvement, but it's too exhausting to continue, in any case, thanks for the story. Honestly, it's not easy to find a good TES-V story, so I'm still grateful for the chapters read so far -284-.

Well, it's a shame. At first I thought it would have a good story with a background in Skyrim, but I soon saw that the development is generic and the mc is extremely lascivious, well, it was still possible to read, but then the mc started to do NTR, the worst thing is that this plot is lazy and meaningless, at least it didn't convince me.

???, okay...

Well... I lost interest, that's it.

well, that got boring really quickly, mc is the guy who read LOTM, but not Harry Potter, a man was going to adopt him, then he died, he went to the police station and found Hagrid, Hagrid set the police station on fire and he took the guilt, he started being wanted, he started stealing and again it got to the point where another crook "liked" his skills, leading to him being controlled...this is very tiring to read.