Honestly, I recommend reading it only when you're bored... I didn't like some things, the main one is the author using () to inform unnecessary things, 2nd him awakening the conqueror's haki was also quite anticlimactic and quite forced, after all I think the author was unable to develop the protagonist's relationship with the duke. It also has the cliché of the powerful and unknown old man, something that seems quite forced in the plot. The character designs are terrible, I can't imagine the protagonist or his crew. Now, I praise the author for being able to develop the issue of them being pirates, but without this "stereotype" of an evil villain, will he kill? It goes but it doesn't give you that "bad" feeling that he took a life, it gives you the same feeling as the Straw Hats, they've probably already killed a lot of people, mainly indirectly.
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Honest review. I like it. its really boring. even when write this story. i feel bored. but what can I say? they are now in the practice period. They are not the protagonists of One Piece. so they need patients. you can go to grand line and fight everyone. Do you think some begger from the street wanted to become a pirate and became the protagonist just because he wanted to? no! Everyone needs time to become strong. Only Luffy, with his plug-in, can do it. But here, Rood isn't. He is waiting and practicing. As for the killing,. yes, he is a bad guy. He kills a lot of people. but they are all those who attacked him first. and every pirate have bounty. Do you think pirate life is as easy as it is shown in one piece?
At no time did I complain about their training period, I understand that deeply, and honestly it's actually cool to watch them develop. and on the issue of pirates being "good guys", did I ever say that? I also understand and I understand that even the Straw Hats have killed some extras (even if it doesn't show on screen), the only thing I said about the character's nature, it was a compliment on how you developed him!!! I'm not criticizing the protagonist's nature, I like protagonists who just fight back and are fair with their partners. The only thing I said was that despite killing people, he DOESN'T GET THAT BAD FEELING OF DOING SOMETHING BAD, it's just kill or be killed, I like that attitude of his.
aitch_Dao:Honest review. I like it. its really boring. even when write this story. i feel bored. but what can I say? they are now in the practice period. They are not the protagonists of One Piece. so they need patients. you can go to grand line and fight everyone. Do you think some begger from the street wanted to become a pirate and became the protagonist just because he wanted to? no! Everyone needs time to become strong. Only Luffy, with his plug-in, can do it. But here, Rood isn't. He is waiting and practicing. As for the killing,. yes, he is a bad guy. He kills a lot of people. but they are all those who attacked him first. and every pirate have bounty. Do you think pirate life is as easy as it is shown in one piece?
Now I apologize for using the word "boring", I think it is more appropriate that it is good to read this story of yours when you are "bored" or have little time. Remember that I am using the keyboard that translates my native language, so it translates the words, BUT it doesn't have the same meaning for me. The word "bored" is a great example of this!!! in my native language it doesn't mean something bad. it just means it's a hobby.
aitch_Dao:Honest review. I like it. its really boring. even when write this story. i feel bored. but what can I say? they are now in the practice period. They are not the protagonists of One Piece. so they need patients. you can go to grand line and fight everyone. Do you think some begger from the street wanted to become a pirate and became the protagonist just because he wanted to? no! Everyone needs time to become strong. Only Luffy, with his plug-in, can do it. But here, Rood isn't. He is waiting and practicing. As for the killing,. yes, he is a bad guy. He kills a lot of people. but they are all those who attacked him first. and every pirate have bounty. Do you think pirate life is as easy as it is shown in one piece?
Sorry. Sorry. Sorryyyyyyyy I misunderstood you. You know when someone tries to explain something but can't explain it properly. I have this problem, so I made mistake
meHzyk:At no time did I complain about their training period, I understand that deeply, and honestly it's actually cool to watch them develop. and on the issue of pirates being "good guys", did I ever say that? I also understand and I understand that even the Straw Hats have killed some extras (even if it doesn't show on screen), the only thing I said about the character's nature, it was a compliment on how you developed him!!! I'm not criticizing the protagonist's nature, I like protagonists who just fight back and are fair with their partners. The only thing I said was that despite killing people, he DOESN'T GET THAT BAD FEELING OF DOING SOMETHING BAD, it's just kill or be killed, I like that attitude of his.
all right lol
aitch_Dao:Sorry. Sorry. Sorryyyyyyyy I misunderstood you. You know when someone tries to explain something but can't explain it properly. I have this problem, so I made mistakeimage
ur English is good 👍
meHzyk:Now I apologize for using the word "boring", I think it is more appropriate that it is good to read this story of yours when you are "bored" or have little time. Remember that I am using the keyboard that translates my native language, so it translates the words, BUT it doesn't have the same meaning for me. The word "bored" is a great example of this!!! in my native language it doesn't mean something bad. it just means it's a hobby.
hahahah I think it's more appropriate for my keyboard that translates to receive your compliments
Scarface3699:ur English is good 👍
