Review Detail of Jadeite_Green in Solo Dominance

Hello, Author. From what I've read in chapters 1 through 3, there appear to be some errors, such as incorrect use of punctuation, and starting in chapter 4, you only focus on the character's dialogue. In order to increase the readers' interest in your story, add more description of the setting as well as details about the characters' actions and thoughts. That's all, continue the wonderful job.