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2019-01-09 เข้าร่วมแล้วPhilippines
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Jadeite_Green9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว[Sacred Doctor's College, Philippines]- Jadeite_Green9mthตอบกลับถึง UelUelPeta is surely taking her sweet time tonight. I really have an urge to sleep, so I gently shut my eyes, getting ready to slip into a much-needed slumber.
- Jadeite_Green9mthตอบกลับถึง Yukinizce
- Jadeite_Green9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
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ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Jadeite_Green9mthแปะแล้ว
Hello, Author. From what I've read in chapters 1 through 3, there appear to be some errors, such as incorrect use of punctuation, and starting in chapter 4, you only focus on the character's dialogue. In order to increase the readers' interest in your story, add more description of the setting as well as details about the characters' actions and thoughts. That's all, continue the wonderful job.
- Jadeite_Green9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think it is better if you do not use capital letters in this line.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Jadeite_Green9mthตอบกลับถึง Alejandro_Del_ReyCh 1 Hayeon Yujin
- Jadeite_Green9mthตอบกลับถึง Alejandro_Del_ReyCh 2 New Life
- Jadeite_Green9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Are you kidding me, Seth, why do you ask me such a strange question in the middle of those nuisances?"
- Jadeite_Green9mthแปะแล้ว
- Jadeite_Green9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAbigail looked confused at first and pouted, looking extremely depressed as traces of sadness appeared on her face. "You… You didn't even let me finish. I was so close to the ending!"
- Jadeite_Green9mthแปะแล้ว
I'm enjoying your story so far. keep up the food work❤❤❤
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Jadeite_Green9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว