This is indeed an excellent novel that I'm thoroughly enjoying. Your ideas are truly captivating. I've already devoured 11 chapters, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the rest. However, I've noticed a few minor grammatical mistakes and instances where 'me' is used instead of 'her' in some chapters. A small revision could enhance the overall reading experience. Please don't take my feedback as criticism. Your work is undeniably brilliant, and a bit of editing before uploading can make it shine even brighter.
Evara_Freya
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ถูกใจHey Rara, I am done editing chapters, you can read now. I will be done with all the chapters by tomorrow. Thank you for waiting patiently
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