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Noely_poley
Noely_poleyLv141yrNoely_poley

This is some of the worst writeing I’ve seen on this app The grammer is so bad the writer forget most of it the only good part is the pargraph spacing and the spelling The characters make no sence The Mc makes the dumbest decisions I couldent get past chapter one I am 100% sure that the other reviews are from friends or something like that don’t read this also auther I’ll reread this if you respond that it’s been fixed and I’ll rewrite this review then.

I Learned Martial Arts From A Game Interface

BigDreamWriter

Liked it!

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BigDreamWriter
BigDreamWriterนักเขียนBigDreamWriter

Well I am sorry if i did not meet your expectations.I will try to improve. No mean to insult but please also try to improve your spelling

Noely_poley
Noely_poleyLv14Noely_poley

Btw im not trinna just be mean you clearly have potential you just need to edit better and it would be readable but your characters still make dumb decisions

BigDreamWriter
BigDreamWriterนักเขียนBigDreamWriter

As for the main character making dumb decisions, Its your opinion. It is his personality as a loser