honestly, when the nerfs to the abilities came I was agreeing with some of the comments stating how it was redundant to the story to have the op tag. At that moment it seemed like it was going to be another story with endless nerfs later on and constant annoyances but luckily to my surprise it wasn't as bad as a nerf as I had previously thought. although there was a part stating how he was gonna seal the instant death ability right near the end of the first chapter. I think that part specifically for me put me off a good amount but the truth is that he does still use the ability as when someone uses killing intent towards him they do still die so after reading that part I was not as torn up about it as before. I recommend that part be changed a bit as in that moment it seems like he will really never use that ability. Over all I think the writing is good and the pace as well. 5/5 - there are definitely things that could be done to make it better and some structural changes to the writing as well so others don't interpret certain things wrong but I'm not a hard critique and I enjoyed the story.
Asthoglho
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