Review Detail of IslandFlare in One Spring Day With You

I know my rating is low, but its mainly due to a lack of world building and spelling. A good point I want to bring forward was the development of the relationship was fast, but felt natural due to the how each character was expressed in a way that made them feel unique. Writing you MC short is a great way to then shoe in other elements such as comedy and romance, or conflict such as discriminations over physical appearances. I also liked how you portrayed James. He seems like the ideal friend but ensure to don't make your characters to one sided. Do not be afraid to invite flaws into the characters.