MJWrites

I like that Felicia is able to make it clear this is not her choice. Bravo!

The story is fast paced. With each new chapter, we get introduced to new characters. Looking forward to reading the next chapters. Good work. Keep it up.

Thank you for your review

Should the 'but' be there?

Many thanks for the advice. As a newbie, your comments are a great help. I will explore more writing styles. Cheers!

Should be 'office' worker instead of 'officer'

It's exhilarating for a first chapter. Good start. Can't wait to read Chapter 3 [img=recommend]

You might want to close this speech at [senior"] Zhang Xuan answered back.

Wow! Hot chapter! Love it!

I think 'maybe it was after her mother 'fell' sick' instead of 'felt'. I like how you explain the feelings that Iris is feeling. Makes it easy to connect with Iris