Review Detail of aniwatcher in Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation

Item: Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation
Rating: 4

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aniwatcherLv18mthaniwatcher

The story is pretty solid, It was really good, there are two problems i would like to address 1:Consistency[img=update] 2:Pacing this is all

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Can you help with the consistency part? I want to know how I can improve that. It would be really helpful.

8mth

Davidan_99Lv4Davidan_99

just write more, webnovel users are used to daily update

D2_E2_V2:Can you help with the consistency part? I want to know how I can improve that. It would be really helpful.

3mth