Davidan_99

I want moreeeee

it's all okay until the kiss, if it was just the date it was acceptable, but not the kiss on the lips, that was over the limits for most readers, by doing this you just doomed this "possibile fmc"

another idiot here

remember he is still a child, only 10 years old

and here I thought he would bully our mc

bro the novel is literally a fan fiction of twilight 🤦🤦

and how could "breaks" recover prana? I thought he used toxin or meditation to gain prana

i don't understand, they make a lot of effort to gather prana, but then the mc is willing to use all his mana for these exercise and other things but then he says that he can recover wtf, shouldn't prank be very difficult to gather?

🦏 rhino

seriously? for me it was instant, the problem is you not the author