Review Detail of InternetSaint in One Piece: I reincarnated as Rayleigh's grandson
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One Piece: I reincarnated as Rayleigh's grandson
thegoatedonekg
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This is not a cliche because this isn't even really a story. A story would explore and explain how the character got to that point, what you are doing is just a low IQ pre-teen level fantasy of "What if Ironman got the powers of Spiderman" but without the actual relevant part that explains how that happened.
thegoatedonekg:I’m sorry you don’t like the cliche. Thanks for the review
Dazai_Osamu_2088:are you really serious one star for just that?? you're not even giving a real review here😶image
do what you want 🙁 but i just hope you don't get this author arrested with this review when he can do something good With that fanfic 😐
InternetSaint:I am not reviewing a real story.
Dazai_Osamu_2088:do what you want 🙁 but i just hope you don't get this author arrested with this review when he can do something good With that fanfic 😐
I see where you’re coming from and I will take it into consideration when writing future stories. But this is my first attempt at ever writing a story so I’m not looking to create an insanely good plot with many layers. I will of course put effort into my story and I’ll try to make it more unique as it goes on. As for why he got reincarnated, there arent really any reasons. He wasnt special. I was trying to convey that with good enough karma everyone gets reincarnated. I do agree the wishes from god are a cheap cop-out but Im still hoping to make it a good fanfiction nonetheless. Thank you for actually saying what you didnt like though, I appreciate it!
InternetSaint:This is not a cliche because this isn't even really a story. A story would explore and explain how the character got to that point, what you are doing is just a low IQ pre-teen level fantasy of "What if Ironman got the powers of Spiderman" but without the actual relevant part that explains how that happened.
maybe I consume junk but you really need education since frankly your parents failed in their work🤦♂️
InternetSaint:lol you consume garbage, your opinion doesn't matter.
Dazai_Osamu_2088:maybe I consume junk but you really need education since frankly your parents failed in their work🤦♂️
thegoatedonekg:I see where you’re coming from and I will take it into consideration when writing future stories. But this is my first attempt at ever writing a story so I’m not looking to create an insanely good plot with many layers. I will of course put effort into my story and I’ll try to make it more unique as it goes on. As for why he got reincarnated, there arent really any reasons. He wasnt special. I was trying to convey that with good enough karma everyone gets reincarnated. I do agree the wishes from god are a cheap cop-out but Im still hoping to make it a good fanfiction nonetheless. Thank you for actually saying what you didnt like though, I appreciate it!
I see forgive me for not recognizing an omnipresent god such as yourself. Surely you will know when someone is crying through a screen and is all-knowing. May the edgelords bow before your greatness milord😂😂
InternetSaint:You are crying about my behavior though?
Objectively you are crying over my words. Also you think you are clever or something? 'crying over something' has nothing to do with actual tears, just as 'being mad' doesn't mean someone is clinically insane. lol you think you are smart but you are actually seriously stupid.
Winter_Whisperer:I see forgive me for not recognizing an omnipresent god such as yourself. Surely you will know when someone is crying through a screen and is all-knowing. May the edgelords bow before your greatness milord😂😂
Oh my God did I hit a nerve? So sorry for that. And honestly, the one who is crying over every little thing is you? what are you 14? Getting triggered with very little thing and thinking that insults make you a sigma male. Don't worry I understand. I was also In that phase once. But let me tell you. It honestly doesn't make you such a chad. You are not cool insulting people on the internet ( as hilarious as that is trolling idiots on webnovel )
InternetSaint:Objectively you are crying over my words. Also you think you are clever or something? 'crying over something' has nothing to do with actual tears, just as 'being mad' doesn't mean someone is clinically insane. lol you think you are smart but you are actually seriously stupid.
Winter_Whisperer:Oh my God did I hit a nerve? So sorry for that. And honestly, the one who is crying over every little thing is you? what are you 14? Getting triggered with very little thing and thinking that insults make you a sigma male. Don't worry I understand. I was also In that phase once. But let me tell you. It honestly doesn't make you such a chad. You are not cool insulting people on the internet ( as hilarious as that is trolling idiots on webnovel )
