isn't this too sudden? or too soon?

Writing Quality - 5 🌟 There are no issues with your grammar that are too noticeable. Story Development - 5 🌟 It's nice. Not too many chapters yet to properly review the development but from what it has shown, it's promising. Character Design - 5 🌟 Ace as the MC is not rare but writing Ace with an evil alignment, I have not seen that before. Plus all his crews are made of minor side villains from the original which I find quite interesting. Updating Stability - 2 🌟 Two stars because it is not dropped by the author yet. This where the main issue for me is. but considering the author does have a naruto fanfic he's writing, I can pardon it. plus I'm reading that fic as well. World Background - 5 🌟 Nothing worth mentioning. it is still in the beginning phase.

hmm, the New chapter is good and all but because of how long the intervals are, I forget the details. Hard to commit because of that. Thanks for the chap tho~

I love it. It has a resemblance to another story I have been reading, Technology System in the Modern World. My only critique is that it feels that the MC is rushing a lot. Like there could have been a better way to implement all the technologies and introduce them. But other than that, this is a 10/10 read. Definitely recommend.

dear author Do you have any plans to write another Story?

sure, I'll give it. On yours knees

I mean, I would want to cuddle with Po. No homo tho

for the likeable sentient system 😂

I don't mind the harem genre, but it gets a bit boring when the main character ends up with every female character. It would be nice to see male characters with their own love interests and relationships. I also prefer stories that don't sideline male characters and only focus on the MC and the girls. It's not about Ichigo being powerful or weak; it's more about having a balanced and diverse representation in the story.

Now that I think about it, What was she doing during the Dvalin fight? in Canon I mean. I haven't unlocked her story quest yet.

10 is fine. But i do have a concern. The potential retaliation from other faction, namely the norse and the hindhu pantheon attacking others who were left behind. Miyako and Ichigo must be protected at all costs. I have a feeling Ichigo will die. And I don't want that.

I did not know she was capable of that. Cute.

The traveler is Lumine not Aether. Aether is the Abyss sibling in this fic.

Lumine.

Is the quirk affecting him more than I thought? Like Bakugo's explosive temper, does he have permanent anger issues as well?

I want more!! I need them!