Review Detail of Gotha in Op Hybrid with an Op System on Harry Potter
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It's okey but hurts my eyes reading it... You really need an editor since it's obvious that you won't do it yourself because you keep repeating the same mistake over and over
Op Hybrid with an Op System on Harry Potter
Adrianix1234
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Definitely agree with it needing editing. The major thing this story needs is actual dialogue and characterization. A majority of this story is just a glorified plot summary of the mc shopping for op items and abilities. There are little to no meaningful interactions and no real conflict of any kind.