skyhound

I can't really enjoy the Mc acting all chummy and happy with Emmet. I might be a minority but how they did Mc was dirty. It's always in the back of my mind when I read about their interactions. If he forgave them this easily, I really think you should've just had him join the Cullens in a straightforward way. It would have made these past few chapters a lot more enjoyable. Everyone of them were saved by Carlisle creating an unbreakable bond. While he was coerced with Rosalie asking for him to be killed. I think you should fix this issue because I'm really not convinced with Mc and Emmet's new friendship.

Finally our Mc can get some revenge.

this is looking good the crytek suits will be a game changer. Heck it'll probably make some of the other Primarch's jealous that their sons don't have it.

I was wondering why dialogue was repetitive and the majority of the relationship progress was summarized.

Seeing our Mc improve this much is so satisfying. Even with the system it's hard work managing his relationship with his dad, the criminal and his stress.

Thank goodness, I'm just here for a heartwarming familial relationship.

She dropped him like a bad habit

I'm really enjoying this xianxia fanfic, I read the original BTTH a while back but only the first few arcs. I was initially worried the MC would become a simp in pursuit of love. Thankfully the Mc maintains his dignity and forms sincere loving relationships. The Mc is also reasonable and actually repays his debts. He doesn't massacre innocents and makes an effort to help his group grow in power. The pacing is quicker compared to the source material but that's normal for most Xianxia genre fanfics. The grammar has no glaring mistakes and flows very well. The update schedule is fantastic also. In terms of world background it explains some stuff but you need to have some familiarity with the source material to enjoy it more. This isn't really a criticism because it's applicable to most fanfics. Overall I give this fic a big thumbs up 👍. I binged the chapters pretty quickly.

I'll wait till this plotline is over before fully judging it. So far, I really don't know how his image can survive publicly killing 100 people without proof of being mine controlled.

It's gonna be really satisfying seeing him advance to the Saint rank.