skyhound

Asuma is a good guy but fics slander him so that Kurenai can become a part of the harem.

The MC is basically the same as Orochimaru with a bit more humanity. I'm hoping for some character growth because he's not that compelling as an MC in terms of personality.

Dang, Nagato was growing on me too, he died like a true man.

I have zero sympathy for the phantom troupe even with them reminiscing on good times. I hope the Mc doesn't get too close to them.

She slept with Daemon Sand who was a squire under Oberyn. She likely did it to rebel against her father. Since he didn't keep her informed of his plans. His big mistake was starting his negotiations with Mc on a lie.

Correction: Uchiha Izumi

I can't really enjoy the Mc acting all chummy and happy with Emmet. I might be a minority but how they did Mc was dirty. It's always in the back of my mind when I read about their interactions. If he forgave them this easily, I really think you should've just had him join the Cullens in a straightforward way. It would have made these past few chapters a lot more enjoyable. Everyone of them were saved by Carlisle creating an unbreakable bond. While he was coerced with Rosalie asking for him to be killed. I think you should fix this issue because I'm really not convinced with Mc and Emmet's new friendship.

Finally our Mc can get some revenge.

this is looking good the crytek suits will be a game changer. Heck it'll probably make some of the other Primarch's jealous that their sons don't have it.

I was wondering why dialogue was repetitive and the majority of the relationship progress was summarized.