Review Detail of Galanar in PERHAPS MY LIFE COULD BE BETTER

Your story seems well thought out. The quality of the writing is good, aside from some minor typos, and your character is well described. Overall good, even though it's not my type of novel, it seems like a decent one :) PS. I gave 3 stars to stuff I couldn't really comment on, since I didn't see it in the one chapter I read.