I’ve read up to 5 chapters and I got to say Shi is an interesting character that hooks one’s attention. My only issue are the long paragraphs that needs breaking, as well as the excessive amount of commas. My suggestion for the author is to use semicolons to divide the sentences, or an em dash. But overall, an interesting read.
ZeroX0666
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