Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in An Undying Love Story

It's a notable novel, and it has a promising storyline. I really like that it was written in a diary entry form. And hence, the use of present tense, which is good. It has an interesting premise, and the story development was intriguing. The characterization was greatly done, and so was the world-building. It has long chapters, which I really enjoyed, and the descriptions are good. There were just a few minor grammatical errors like misuse of punctuation marks and typos. I hope that those could be edited, and I also think it'll be better for the long paragraphs on the first few chapters to be divided. Smoothening those could help the readers to digest the scenes more. Overall, it was a great novel. I really like the story, and I'll be rooting for it! I meant no offense to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!