Review Detail of KayyRo in An Undying Love Story

So, I like it. As soon as I read the synopsis of the story, I was interested. I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but it is definitely a good ready and I intend to keep up with the story. As with most stories, (including my own), there are a couple punctuation areas that could use an edit, but I enjoy it so far. Thanks for posting :)