Review Detail of Victortoery12 in Marvel: Meditation System

It seems to get worse as it progresses, I liked it until about chapter 20. The author is lazy with his use of words (1 instead of one etc) and has a lot of redundant phrases. The author didn’t plan ahead and is doing stuff on the fly, so the story seems to devolve and get worse every chapter. The author notes/editors notes mid story also ruin immersion and really make the quality of the writing worse. Notes go at the end of the chapter, never mid chapter. Grammar and spelling are ok, within tolerance. The idea was interesting, though the “store selling” thing and the forced Natasha romance thing ruined any love I had for the story. The steal black widow quest changing after a chapter was jarring, it would have been better to rewrite those chapters than to force “romance” via a quest. Any attempt at romance would have been better then the quest stuff.