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2021-07-10 12:59

This has a great start and an even better plot concept. I wish to see more in the future. Best of luck!!! ......................................................................

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So I love this whole a*s concept in general and if you ever drop this I would probably continue a story similar this and since when I am writing this there is only 1 chapter I cant see any flaws yet but I do have things you could use in the future (maybe) #1 I'm pretty sure the author was already going to do this but make it so she is going to be a semi-villain and what I mean is semi-villain is that she will not go off the deep end and become a full psychotic murderer but will be a person that will do what she wants and fulfill .what she wants to do with her life but she will kill if she has to do that..#2 Character interactions are a large part of any fanfiction so I think what would be good for this fanfiction is that the MC will be a person that at first try's to make it so it that they would stick to what they did in Naruto but after she realizes the changes in this universe she will not care anymore #3 this is not a suggestion but more a guess of where you are going to do in the future of the story and I think what you are going to do is that instead of Danzo being the bad guy and Hiruzen being the good guy it would be the opposite...To describe what is good about the story in the present would 100% be the Author's grammar how he is doing things with character development and how you surround this mystery over what are the changes in this AU that changed the timeline so much....So overall I Would say this would be a must read and is a entirely unique style and if I have one last thing to say-I would say that the Author should not degrade the MC into surviving or furthering the plot from entirely lucky encounters like most Author's that try to do this type of story....(Long A*s Review)

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