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Thiarha
ThiarhaLv43yr
2021-07-12 13:49

not the best start of the story, It can even be said that it is quite strange because suddenly the MCs are directly children and are hit by reality, No encounter with god or ROB and No Cheat so far. But what so far can still be read even though it leaves a feeling of wanting to berate the author.

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Pandoras_Library
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Thanks for reading! but I will say not every story has to start with a cliche explanation like truck-kun or some ROB. Not every MC needs a cheat either, though it could be said that just having a tailed beast is a cheat enough. The whole point of the story is that she's not the protagonist in the normal sense. She isn't some special one in a million snowflake with the highest karma or whatever. sometimes there is no reason for things to happen. this is just her life now, and sometimes life sucks. she needs to make her own story, not try to live someone else's. Her past barely matters aside from the fact that she watched the anime so there's no reason to really go further into detail regarding it. again thanks for reading and sorry if this wasn't the story you were expecting :(

Thiarha
ThiarhaLv4

That unexceptable is the thing that leave me a feeling want to punch you ngab. very angry

Pandoras_Library:Thanks for reading! but I will say not every story has to start with a cliche explanation like truck-kun or some ROB. Not every MC needs a cheat either, though it could be said that just having a tailed beast is a cheat enough. The whole point of the story is that she's not the protagonist in the normal sense. She isn't some special one in a million snowflake with the highest karma or whatever. sometimes there is no reason for things to happen. this is just her life now, and sometimes life sucks. she needs to make her own story, not try to live someone else's. Her past barely matters aside from the fact that she watched the anime so there's no reason to really go further into detail regarding it. again thanks for reading and sorry if this wasn't the story you were expecting :(
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So I love this whole a*s concept in general and if you ever drop this I would probably continue a story similar this and since when I am writing this there is only 1 chapter I cant see any flaws yet but I do have things you could use in the future (maybe) #1 I'm pretty sure the author was already going to do this but make it so she is going to be a semi-villain and what I mean is semi-villain is that she will not go off the deep end and become a full psychotic murderer but will be a person that will do what she wants and fulfill .what she wants to do with her life but she will kill if she has to do that..#2 Character interactions are a large part of any fanfiction so I think what would be good for this fanfiction is that the MC will be a person that at first try's to make it so it that they would stick to what they did in Naruto but after she realizes the changes in this universe she will not care anymore #3 this is not a suggestion but more a guess of where you are going to do in the future of the story and I think what you are going to do is that instead of Danzo being the bad guy and Hiruzen being the good guy it would be the opposite...To describe what is good about the story in the present would 100% be the Author's grammar how he is doing things with character development and how you surround this mystery over what are the changes in this AU that changed the timeline so much....So overall I Would say this would be a must read and is a entirely unique style and if I have one last thing to say-I would say that the Author should not degrade the MC into surviving or furthering the plot from entirely lucky encounters like most Author's that try to do this type of story....(Long A*s Review)

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