Review Detail of SweetPeace21 in the legend of zero-half angel and half demon god

Hi, author here!!! This is my very first novel. So I sincerely hope you will advise me if I make any mistake. I hope you will support this novel. Thank you very much.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊