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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv133yr
2021-01-09 04:17

I don’t like to be indiscriminately rude, but all these people giving 5 stars are morons. The unlimited shopping ability make the Gamer cheat useless. That cheat is improve attributes, and to learn and improve skills like in a video game. Being overpowered from the start just to seal said power to have a semblance of normalcy is stupid. Yugao falling for a 10yo and kissing him was the last straw. This story is SH*TTY!!

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Harem_Lord
Harem_LordAuthor

I don't know about your country but I have seen 10 yo in mine kissing and 14 having s*x. As for the unlimited shopping ability; I already said this will be OP mc and he will be unmatched so no need for development. Thanks for reading to this point.

Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13

10yo kissing 10yo? Can happen. 14yo having *** isn’t surprising. The problem start when an ***** kiss a 10yo.

Harem_Lord:I don't know about your country but I have seen 10 yo in mine kissing and 14 having s*x. As for the unlimited shopping ability; I already said this will be OP mc and he will be unmatched so no need for development. Thanks for reading to this point.
Harem_Lord
Harem_LordAuthor

That's true but this is not a world like ours so anything is possible there. At the presence of chakra; their body develops rapidly so a 10 yo boy is comparable to 16yo from earth. As the body is mature and looks youthful for a long time, they don't see love using age. Even in here there are many old men marrying young girls and old rich women marrying young male. So its just a perspective of how you see it. You might have came to different conclusion than mine.

Tonyorobsky:10yo kissing 10yo? Can happen. 14yo having *** isn’t surprising. The problem start when an ***** kiss a 10yo.
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

i got to say most of 5 star review are spam exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp lol

A_reader_for_fun
A_reader_for_funLv12

Harem_Lord:I don't know about your country but I have seen 10 yo in mine kissing and 14 having s*x. As for the unlimited shopping ability; I already said this will be OP mc and he will be unmatched so no need for development. Thanks for reading to this point.
JUST_LAUGH
JUST_LAUGHLv10

I haven't read this book since I want to check the review but I agree with you, this is fiction so all impossible in our world is possible in this world, he still thinking that the mindset of people in our world will be same in the fiction. He is like new reader.

Harem_Lord:That's true but this is not a world like ours so anything is possible there. At the presence of chakra; their body develops rapidly so a 10 yo boy is comparable to 16yo from earth. As the body is mature and looks youthful for a long time, they don't see love using age. Even in here there are many old men marrying young girls and old rich women marrying young male. So its just a perspective of how you see it. You might have came to different conclusion than mine.
Nadare17
Nadare17Lv4

Ikr

JUST_LAUGH:I haven't read this book since I want to check the review but I agree with you, this is fiction so all impossible in our world is possible in this world, he still thinking that the mindset of people in our world will be same in the fiction. He is like new reader.
Duck_God
Duck_GodLv5

this fanfic is for horni its clarifies from the synopsis not only that even the cover is for horni just think with the D for once

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