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Everton_Mason
Everton_MasonLv34yr
2021-02-09 14:45

Don't be fooled by the high rating. This book is very bad, I will explain: - The author is not concerned with details, this book when you read it is simply a poor third-person narration, not relevant dialogues or action scenes. - There is no plot, it is free exploration, the MC has a free purchase system, so it basically does not lead anywhere. - If you have read this far, don't mess with shit, read knight of lust, 4 prince, profane prince of domination among others ... not this garbage here.

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Shiliew
ShiliewLv10

1. There's no 'action' in the tags. 2. In the tags there's 'OP-mc' and 'HUGE-Harem' and in the synopsis, the author wrote that this is a harem building fanfiction 3. Why do you compare S tier novels with a wish-fulfillment fanfiction

Everton_Mason
Everton_MasonLv3

Okay, few put the tag action in these types of novels, but they still do a good job, if you read this story (I don't think you did), you will understand that action is not about a genre, it's about construction, and everything is vague and without context as if it were a short trailer. Now it's your problem if you like it, I give my opinion where the webnovel gave space to give 😉

Shiliew:1. There's no 'action' in the tags. 2. In the tags there's 'OP-mc' and 'HUGE-Harem' and in the synopsis, the author wrote that this is a harem building fanfiction 3. Why do you compare S tier novels with a wish-fulfillment fanfiction
crese1967
crese1967Lv3

What's 4 Prince? I can't find it.

Everton_Mason:Okay, few put the tag action in these types of novels, but they still do a good job, if you read this story (I don't think you did), you will understand that action is not about a genre, it's about construction, and everything is vague and without context as if it were a short trailer. Now it's your problem if you like it, I give my opinion where the webnovel gave space to give 😉
Everton_Mason
Everton_MasonLv3

https://m.webnovel.com/book/fourth-prince's-debauchery_15269451505684805

crese1967:What's 4 Prince? I can't find it.
LuXiya
LuXiyaLv3

fourth prince. read it, it's gooood

crese1967:What's 4 Prince? I can't find it.
God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3

Its Lust Knight though not knight of lust, just saying.

Everton_Mason:Okay, few put the tag action in these types of novels, but they still do a good job, if you read this story (I don't think you did), you will understand that action is not about a genre, it's about construction, and everything is vague and without context as if it were a short trailer. Now it's your problem if you like it, I give my opinion where the webnovel gave space to give 😉
Harem_Lord
Harem_LordAuthor

What do you expect from a first time writer. I am not an expert and English is not my first language. If you had followed along then I have already explained why there are little to no dialogue. I also warned you in synopsis and author note that there is no plot and the story focuses on harem building. If you can't even understand what is already explained then not my problem. Hope you find what you wanted elsewhere. Have a nice day

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