Well to tell the truth idk how to make A review but a this point hes only following the main character wich is getting annoying im not going to lie Writing quality 2 i would say you should edit your early chapters because if people see that they are going to start dropping it or putting bad reviews Updating stabilty 1 you took a break igs for a long time idk what happend soooo thats all Story development 1 idk much about this but at this point hes just with the mc and letting everything happened its not fun anymore , like STOP FOLLOWING HIM EVERY WHERE Character design 2 like i said dont know much but umm he feels like aaaaaaa!!!! Idk but its ok igs World backround 4 its Lookism and you put some stuff of your own so thats good igs
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ถูกใจToxicThot435_:I mean i probably have some ideas but do you want your character to be in the good side or bad side ???