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lookism jimins story

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อ่านนิยาย lookism jimins story โดย ผู้เขียน king_sake ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.I'm a very bad writer only started this because Im tired of waiting for the novels I red to make a new chap so this is just to pass the time and please tell me when to correct things...

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I'm a very bad writer only started this because Im tired of waiting for the novels I red to make a new chap so this is just to pass the time and please tell me when to correct things

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Mafia's Little Angel

Peringatan: Cerita ini mengandung unsur 21 tahun ke atas seperti romansa yang intens, aksi yang cukup brutal, pembahasan tentang berbagai macam senjata api, pengkhianatan, penggunaan bahasa kasar dan juga adegan-adegan sensual yang kurang nyaman bagi sebagian pembaca. * * * * * Kekuasaan, Kekayaan dan Wanita. Besar di lingkungan orangtua asuh seorang mafia terkenal membuat David Stockholm harus ikut terseret ke dunia penuh hasrat tersebut. Menghabiskan masa remaja dikelilingi peluru dan darah membuatnya menjadi pribadi yang menakutkan. Meskipun ia kini tumbuh menjadi seorang CEO sebuah perusahaan multi-nasional yang digolongkan sebagai salah satu dari sepuluh perusahaan terkaya di dunia, dan memiliki pesona layaknya Dewa Yunani tak dapat menutupi jati diri seorang mafia yang sadis dan tak kenal ampun. Walaupun semua telah dimilikinya, masih saja ada gejolak yang mengganjal di hatinya. Belum, belum pernah dipuaskan oleh semua yang telah ia raih selama ini dengan keringat dan darah. Bagaimana jika Angeline Youngblood, gadis polos berparas menawan yang selalu dipuja dan kerap menjadi objek fantasi liar oleh kaum adam memiliki sesuatu--yang tidak dimiliki oleh wanita lain--yang dapat membuat David merasa terpenuhi; hasratnya yang terpendam. Namun dosa lama David yang telah ditinggalkannya belasan tahun lalu kini muncul kembali, mengancam kehidupannya dan juga orang-orang di sekitarnya, membuat David harus memberikan seluruh yang ia punya untuk melindunginya. "Tak peduli berapa banyak peluru yang harus bersarang di tubuhku. Selama aku masih bisa bernapas, maka napas inilah yang akan melindungimu."

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Richest President Director : Trapped by Love

WARNING, 21+!! vol. 2 Vrans Moreo Luis. One of the successful young entrepreneurs at his age. His undeniable face made all the girls kneel to him. His heart still has one name, that is his first love. It's a bit difficult to shake off that feeling, especially since they have a strong friendship status. Yes, Vrans has been trapped in a one-sided love pit. Xena Carleta Anderson, a naughty and naughty girl who unluckily becomes the chief secretary of her company, bothers her a lot. The girl managed to melt his heart just by the ridiculous nature she showed. It was that simple but capable of making Vrans fall in love with her. Until one day, someone who knows Vrans much better than himself begins to enter the man's life, causing an incident that manages to rip apart Xena's memory. Many unimaginable events will enter Xena's life, such as being caught in the game of an assassin who almost took everything. How will their story end? "Your struggle for love today is to develop the strength you need for tomorrow." -Xena Carleta Anderson ______ Vol. 1 Leonardo Luis. One of the President Director with the title of 'richest' stuck to his body, making a woman scream right at the tip of his tongue. From sports car collections to private jets, they are all very common to him. Only one is missing, a woman. Being abandoned by his ex-wife for trivial reasons who chose to remarry after divorcing him, led him to instill the thought that no woman can last long in his life. So, this is Leo. Begins to spread the true charm of 'Richest President Director'. "Being rich is no reason to be happy." Come on, see the story! ---

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king_sake
king_sakeนักเขียนking_sake

well I don't know how I'm going to do that's up to u guys pls give me any type of criticism I can take it but don't just insult me pls I just doin this for fun so pls don't flame me

Yu_Feng
Yu_FengLv1Yu_Feng

this one of the only lookism fanfics on webonovel it's not the greatest of all time but it's update stability is great I hope he learns how to punctate correctly at some point tho

Saint_Lons
Saint_LonsLv1Saint_Lons

I would say your getting better then from when I first started to read please don't drop plaeseeeeee I will support with power stones bro bro bro

Lake_Klan
Lake_KlanLv1Lake_Klan

I think the author has a good idea but he just doesn't know how to put it down on the paper right if that makes sense well that's just my opinion

Dannt_
Dannt_Lv2Dannt_

Hare una reseña sobre mi opinion sobre esto, aunque se subio hace 2 años. Calidad de escritura 1 estrella: ¿en serio hermano?, solo narras todo y simplemente las conversaciones las narras, se siente como un resumen Estabilidad de actualización 1 estrella, bueno su ultima actualizacion fue hace 2 años y que los capitulos sean de menos de 700 palabras da mucho que hablar Desarrollo de la historia 1 estrella: dice que no tiene tiempo para hacer capitulos mas largos, ¿ por que te apresuras a subir capitulo?, por que simplemente no subes 1 cap por semana lo suficientemente largo y que no sea por escribir nada mas, es aburrido leer un resumen asi. Puede ser mejor si simplemente escribiera algo mejor y las conversaciones no fuera tipo "yo dije esto" y ya, simplemente asco Diseño de personaje 1 estrella, no se sabe si es reencarnado o que. Simplemente es un personaje superficial y ademas con 10 años mide 170 cm lo cual es ilogico, entonces cuando termine de crecer (probablemente a los 20) medira 3 metros? Aunque el mundo es lookism, como que algrego cosas personales a su gusto, lo cual esta bien. Pero solo esta bien cuando almenos explica que paso Asi que si nisiquiera te esfuerzas ni escribas

Dead00
Dead00Lv4Dead00

I can’t tell the p.o.v for the characters at all and it’s so confusing

KING_ABBASI
KING_ABBASILv4KING_ABBASI

bro you just came back and now you disappeared again c'mon bro we don't have any lookism ff so plz don't drop this 🙏🙏

Miyuri_CY
Miyuri_CYLv1Miyuri_CY

keep it up [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]^_~◑﹏◐§(* ̄▽ ̄*)§(ಥ _ ಥ)>﹏<ψ(`∇´)ψO(∩_∩)OO(∩_∩)O(´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)(^_-)db(-_^)o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブo(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

ToxicThot435_
ToxicThot435_Lv3ToxicThot435_

Well to tell the truth idk how to make A review but a this point hes only following the main character wich is getting annoying im not going to lie Writing quality 2 i would say you should edit your early chapters because if people see that they are going to start dropping it or putting bad reviews Updating stabilty 1 you took a break igs for a long time idk what happend soooo thats all Story development 1 idk much about this but at this point hes just with the mc and letting everything happened its not fun anymore , like STOP FOLLOWING HIM EVERY WHERE Character design 2 like i said dont know much but umm he feels like aaaaaaa!!!! Idk but its ok igs World backround 4 its Lookism and you put some stuff of your own so thats good igs

MrYamcha
MrYamchaLv4MrYamcha

Hello author please put paragraph spaces and instead of making multiple short chapters just make it into a 800 word one or something it is very draining reading long paragraphs no offense

RaulXD
RaulXDLv4RaulXD

Primero que todo, gran idea. Pero no todo puede ser perfecto, pero mejorar no es muy dificil. Solo recomendaría que intentes aligerar el contenido de la lectura, todo está muy comprimido, literal y figurativamente. Puedo notar tus ideas, que realmente son buenas, pero en la ejecución está fallando un poco, da un respiro y no te apresures. Y SOBRE TODO CONTINUA POR QUE TIENES ALGO BUENO.

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