Review Detail of qaint in Naruto: The Outsider {Dropped}

Item: Naruto: The Outsider {Dropped}
Rating: 2.6

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qaintLv133yrqaint

This is my review at chapter 26. Imo the premise was promising but story got real bad and bland real fast. First we got the classic bipolar, no personality other than being unnecessarily ruthless mc that occasionally has happy go lucky moodswings. 2. I am 26 chapters in and mc has no visable aim or ambition other than killing danzo which is basically mandotary at naruto fanfics at this point. 3. 0 character development including the mc. But I don't want to just criticise the novel so here are some good points. The good points for this novel would be 1.grammer isn't horrible, you could even say its about avarege for this site. 2.Author updates frequently. That's about it. Sorry for the long review I hope it can help you guys :)

Naruto: The Outsider {Dropped}

Nechrom

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I was going to make him like easy to be angered and rush thing up without thinking much of the future, but nooo when I write it like that everybody complains like 'oh no he a retard since he angry at system, why doesn't he think? he stupid' Something like that.

3yr

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While it's not my place to dictate what an author should or shouldn't do I believe it would have been waaaay better than the lack of personality we have right now.I also think that you should just write whatever you wish to and don't care what the trolls in this site thinks since they mostly can't think beyond H A R E M.

Nechrom:I was going to make him like easy to be angered and rush thing up without thinking much of the future, but nooo when I write it like that everybody complains like 'oh no he a retard since he angry at system, why doesn't he think? he stupid' Something like that.

3yr