Review Detail of LiYao in Naruto: The Outsider {Dropped}

i really like the story and it was great. but there are some inconsistency to it. like the use of storm release techniques. some of the storm release can be considered as lightning release. some gramatical errors. but i know as you write it will improve. also some plot hole about the time he spend on the dojo training. he spend 3 months on that. it means that he didnt eat and just sleeps for 3 months and he's fine no weakness and what about the wounds he suffered did it heal well or some sequela. what if some found him and kill him or since he was just floating in the sea what if he was affected by a strong typhoon or crashed into a big boat or more. and may be im just worrywart . but over all i'm satisfied with your work and KEEP IT UP!!!